This gives me an ice/water dungeon vibe. It could definitely benefit from extra instruments and some fine tuning, but I actually find the melody rather pleasant. As nicklegends said, the potential in this piece is blatant.
EDIT
I actually didn't see that you intended this to be for an ice dungeon, bravo!
inflicted
Description:
Here is a song I finished it took me two days. I hope you enjoy it, and please tell me what you think. And i think this song could be used in a ice dungeon, cold cave, isolate place, etc.
Credits:
Legend27 (me)
Here is a song I finished it took me two days. I hope you enjoy it, and please tell me what you think. And i think this song could be used in a ice dungeon, cold cave, isolate place, etc.
Credits:
Legend27 (me)
Creator:
Parsnip
Added: 18 Jun 2014
Type: MIDI
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Reviews
nicklegends
Posted 18 June 2014 - 01:53 PM
The melody is a bit difficult to follow without any harmonies or a bass line, but there is clearly potential in this song. I like your command of repetition: we hear similar motions but with slight variations in them. The melody jumps a few times around the 10-second mark, but most of the intervals you use flow pretty well into each other. I think using notes of different lengths (i.e. not all quarter notes), would make the song a little more interesting and also give you more freedom in bridging the larger intervals in the melody.
