Ice Cave Midi Attempt 2
Description:
Somebody said that I should have put high pitched notes in my ice cave midi. so here is a new ice cave midi that's:
*less random
*shorter song
*kind of catchy in loops
*has high pitched notes
please tell me what you think.
Update: i have givin up on the only one note thing this song has more than one.
Credits:
me.
Somebody said that I should have put high pitched notes in my ice cave midi. so here is a new ice cave midi that's:
*less random
*shorter song
*kind of catchy in loops
*has high pitched notes
please tell me what you think.
Update: i have givin up on the only one note thing this song has more than one.
Credits:
me.
Creator:
Haylee
Updated: 14 Aug 2010
Type: MIDI
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Reviews
nicklegends
Posted 12 August 2010 - 11:07 PM
The biggest thing this song needs is some trace of a sensible rhythm or melody. Right now, the song is too random for my ears to latch onto any thread in the music, which ultimately kills the atmosphere. As is, the song summons images of gnome pirates basking in pixie dust. What does that mean? I don't even know. I give you a one because I respect the fact that you took others' advice and sought to improve your own work. It's easy to get discouraged, but please keep trying. 
Solarrain4
Posted 10 August 2010 - 03:44 PM
It really does make me feel bad to rate something this low, but I have to be honest: this is simply no good. The notes are so high that they're not very distinct at all. And also, that in combination with having only one instrument simply makes it way too bland.
I think if you dropped all those high notes down an octave, and added a bassline and other instruments to support the melody, and maybe wrote more parts to it, then maybe it'd have some potential. That's just my guess.
I think if you dropped all those high notes down an octave, and added a bassline and other instruments to support the melody, and maybe wrote more parts to it, then maybe it'd have some potential. That's just my guess.
