Rather mixed.
First five seconds: Good to great.
Next five seconds: Horrible and forced.
After that: Abrupt, but good.
A third of the way through: Became very weak until a little past halfway.
After that: Great again.
Following bass part: Horrible.
After that part: Good again until almost to the end of the song.
Diligo Contemno Quod Desiderium
Description:
In the two weeks prior to the completion of this composition, a lot has happened. Nothing truly bad, like say my parents divorcing or losing my house or something, but things to me anyways. If you translate the title, you should be able to figure it out. I decided the day before I wrote this to turn the events into a kind of story. I tried to portray the story in this piece.
Anyways. There are a few things in this music that may make it seem unfinished. Every thing is as it should be. The reason for this is because all of the "holes" as you could call them correspond with a part of the story. Some of the changes are abrupt because of this as well.
If you want the full story behind this, PM me or contact me in chat, and I will give it to you.
Credits:
Me for writing it, plus a certain girl and her friends for inspiration.
In the two weeks prior to the completion of this composition, a lot has happened. Nothing truly bad, like say my parents divorcing or losing my house or something, but things to me anyways. If you translate the title, you should be able to figure it out. I decided the day before I wrote this to turn the events into a kind of story. I tried to portray the story in this piece.
Anyways. There are a few things in this music that may make it seem unfinished. Every thing is as it should be. The reason for this is because all of the "holes" as you could call them correspond with a part of the story. Some of the changes are abrupt because of this as well.
If you want the full story behind this, PM me or contact me in chat, and I will give it to you.
Credits:
Me for writing it, plus a certain girl and her friends for inspiration.
Creator:
JohnStacy
Added: 15 Aug 2008
Type: MIDI
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Reviews
nicklegends
Posted 15 August 2008 - 09:09 PM
I understand that the overarching song structure is intentional, but some notes within passages seem too random and uninspired, somewhat ironically. With that out of the way, I do like the orchestration and the idea behind the piece, and it maximizes the effect of each section with some powerful moments. Very nice, all in all.
Marco
Posted 15 August 2008 - 08:24 PM
The first bit of the song sounds like FFII
http://www.youtube.c...h?v=epX592iGt1U
Anyways, its awesome
http://www.youtube.c...h?v=epX592iGt1U
Anyways, its awesome
