Screenshot of the Week 84
Posted 27 March 2005 - 01:00 PM
Dang it! I locked the keys in... again!
Just me having fun with the tile editor.
All right, whose bright idea was it to put a hedge maze in the middle of a perfectly good forest?
This will end Saturday morning like normal once again.
Posted 27 March 2005 - 01:24 PM
lord_jamitossi: The bottom half is good, but the top half is a bit undetailed. You need to put something else there, be it rocks or a different type of dirt... just something.
Radien: Fairly good, and those items are awesome.
Posted 27 March 2005 - 01:42 PM
Posted 27 March 2005 - 02:37 PM
Drari: Great shot. Would have been better with more stuff on it.
LinktheMaster: I like this shot alot. Would have been my second vote.
lord_jamitossi: Great tiles, just the palletes are too dark..
Radien: Awesome shot. Just perfect.
Posted 27 March 2005 - 02:51 PM
Posted 27 March 2005 - 05:14 PM
LinktheMaster: My second favorite shot this week. Looks great, but not enough to beat Radien.
lord_jamitossi: The ground and trees look good, but the mountains and the house are just too bland looking.
Radien: This is by far my favorite shot here. It looks just awesome! *Votes*
Posted 27 March 2005 - 05:38 PM
Posted 27 March 2005 - 05:56 PM
LinktheMaster- The wall detail is really nicely Textured, However It seemed to lack that unknowen "Thing" it needed to win my vote.
lord_jamitossi- Give the Mountains some more detail, and the House would look very nice if it was given some siding... Oh, the Tree trunks need better shading... With some further editing of the Tiles, the would have one my vote...
Raiden- Nothing outstandigly good or bad, but yours seemed to be the most polished of the four... So it wins my vote.
<Edit>Sorry... lord_jamitossi, For some reason I thoght Shoelace did that one, Too bad about the color loss the new one looks grea!.
Edited by Redmage777, 27 March 2005 - 09:21 PM.
Posted 27 March 2005 - 08:43 PM
My shot was WAY better than that... Stupid loss of colour...
One sec, I'll link to the real one...
Can we get that fixed up there... It looks awful...
Edited by lord_jamitossi, 29 March 2005 - 11:19 AM.
Posted 27 March 2005 - 09:45 PM
Second would be lord_jamitossi, because I like it when people make custom tiles.
Posted 28 March 2005 - 12:51 AM
Methinks it's gonna be another one of those blowout weeks.
Oh and Radien, what is that thing in the B slot?
Edited by zmaster, 28 March 2005 - 12:54 AM.
Posted 28 March 2005 - 05:44 AM
The B item is a special type of boomerang.
Oh, and the sword is a heavily shrunk version of something from Tales of Phantasia, colors notwithstanding.
I'll post my commentary on the other shots tomorrow. There were no bad shots this time around; everybody did a nice job.
Posted 29 March 2005 - 06:23 PM
That's a very original screen you've got there. Hmm, why is the ship so far right? If you moved it further left, it'd be easier to see Link. Also I'm not sure whether splitting the ripple tiles at the point lightning hits them quite works...
Everything else is great. You might want to try a different palette, though. All this seems to be happening in broad daylight. Why not darken it? If you added a screen flash as well, it would look very cool.
A solid shot all around. There really isn't much to say about this except that it's good. You might want to add towers or something else along the walls, though.
Now that this image's conversion has been "fixed," it looks quite good. The mountains seem a little... small, though. I think the crevasses may be a little too close together. If you spread them apart, but kept everything else the same, it might help them look more... um... mountainous.
Keep it up! I see you improving your artwork every day.You're turning out some pretty cool stuff nowadays.
Posted 30 March 2005 - 08:15 AM
I null voted because I entered, but Radien obviously has the best shot here.
drari : The most obvious thing that I would do with this shot would be to add something where the lightning hits the water. Right now it's too obvious that that's one tile cut in half . Also, as Radien said, the mood is a bit too bright. Mabye add some smoke and clouds and stuff and put a bit more action in the water. Right now, there's thunderbolts hitting it but there's like, 3 waves.
LtM : Add some cracks or something to break the monotony of the wall, and this will be a really nice shot.
Radien : Awesome shot. Really, I can't think of anything to say about it, so I'll just resume it with a .
Posted 30 March 2005 - 05:20 PM
Drari: The screen is good. I really like the lightning. I think it would look good in motion. However, I have to argee that the water is a little plain.
LinktheMaster: I love the castle!! I want those tiles. I am looking for castle tiles like that because I am now in the process of making the castle in my game, HoD. Anyways, if it wasn't for Radien's picture you would have got my vote.
lord_jamitossi: yes, with that color loss it did look odd. Anyways, I like the tiles that you make. You have gotten a lot better.
Radien: This screen isn't your best, however, it still had the "it" factor. The screen was good in design, it wasn't special but was still really good.
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