I don't know why Russ has german in his screenshot caption and Link's shadow on the background (?) is kind of weird too, but other than that I'd call that perfection! It's so very simple, it works. One very memorable screen of the quest.
The caption's a partial translation of the last line of this opening, which uses large amounts of German (as do a lot of songs from the show). The shadow on the background is a result of the script always drawing shadows under you, and it's not really worth fixing for just one screen. Thanks for the compliment!