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#7651 EnnonFenom

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Posted 09 April 2018 - 12:14 PM

Wow, it's been like a month without any posts here! Let's change that. :)

 

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"The first piece of the puzzle..."

Perspective is off. Do you see how link looks to be laying on his belly? or how the trees look as if their looking up Or crawling up the wall?

Those wall are meant for top down, while the rest is for top back view.

 

Actually if you were to remove the trees from the bridge, it would look as if link was climbing a fortress.


Thanks for the feedback. I tried out some different things with the floor on the upper parts of the walls and ended up with this:

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I like this. Soft colors and improved perspective

 

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Oh, have I missed DoR!

DoR is nice, but the repetitive dirt tiles need a few variations. Nor am I fan fan of DoR palette



#7652 Shane

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Posted 09 April 2018 - 03:01 PM

Gameboy perspective looks fine to me? Most objects follow Link and the tree's perspective. It's just the walls follow this perspective since the first game to display the types of door. It's never been a problem honestly. :P

 

Anyways another shot:

 

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I can't wait to set up scripts for this place... : o


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#7653 runaru

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Posted 12 April 2018 - 02:10 PM

Hey! Long time no see. Have some things:
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#7654 Sheik

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Posted 13 April 2018 - 08:30 AM

Lovely! Nice stuff, thanks for sharing.



#7655 Cukeman

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Posted 13 April 2018 - 09:08 AM

Lovely! Nice stuff, thanks for sharing.

 

Do you still have any Zelda 1 makeover files? Or did you lose those too?



#7656 Octorockoncrack

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Posted 18 April 2018 - 06:27 PM

Ive been doing some experimenting with BS the past couple days. I remembered that the BS tileset comes with a Z1 clone, so I decided to go and do some editing to revamp the 1st quest. Ive added a couple items and expanded on the tiles, importing some decorative tiles from PTUX (bushes, grass, etc.)

 

Here's a couple shots of the original 1st quest in the BS set:

 

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And these are edits to those screens in my rendition:

 

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Didn't notice that I took a pic of Link getting shot in the head. lol


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#7657 Sheik

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Posted 23 April 2018 - 08:56 AM

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Trying out some things in DoR.


Edit: Cukeman - I just saw your question now. I don't have any of them at the moment.


Edited by Sheik, 23 April 2018 - 11:28 AM.

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#7658 Soarin

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Posted 24 April 2018 - 06:42 AM

Hello Everybody What do you guys think of this Screen?

https://www.photobox...id=500737863567

 I might need to add some details to it still.

 

Also

Sheik Nice screenShot with the DOR tileset. :bounce:


Edited by Soarin, 24 April 2018 - 06:47 AM.

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#7659 Geoffrey

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Posted 24 April 2018 - 11:16 AM

Hello Everybody What do you guys think of this Screen?

https://www.photobox...id=500737863567

 I might need to add some details to it still.

 

When I click that link, it redirects me to the homepage of that website. In my experience, Imgur is more reliable - but in general it's best to use a hosting service that allows you to link directly to the image.


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#7660 Soarin

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Posted 24 April 2018 - 02:27 PM

https://imgur.com/hgW3lOo


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#7661 Sheik

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Posted 25 April 2018 - 11:37 AM

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#7662 Jared

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Posted 25 April 2018 - 12:36 PM

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Man, Sheik do you inspire me for my own quest. :)
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#7663 Soarin

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Posted 27 April 2018 - 08:32 PM

This is  a little map i am working on.

 

https://imgur.com/8U24iTe  >> What do you think?


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#7664 Shane

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Posted 28 April 2018 - 04:55 AM

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Overworld is over half way done and should be done in a few days. :) Setting up enemies soon too.


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#7665 EnnonFenom

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Posted 28 April 2018 - 06:18 AM

Sheik, well designed placements, and lighting. But the stump really conflits with the perspective of the screen.  I am sure you can masterfuly edit that.

the trick I found was draw an oval not circle

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