Nocturne - The perspective is just all wrong. The background is flat and makes the screen look like your typical top-down ZC dungeon screen with those block tiles. But that's why it's a problem: You can't have a good side-scrolling section if every section looks like it's a top-down section. I think you need some different block tiles with a different perspective, or shadow the background, or... something.
Shane - Should've had a background. Could've been funnier that way. Slightly funny, but... meh.
Koh - You did very well on this screen. I honestly can't find anything about it I'd change except maybe the water below, and it just looks good overall. Nicely done.
Yoshidude - Admittedly, you use the BS tileset better than some I've seen. Better than me, that's for sure. No real complaints here, except the bush at the bottom of the screen. That could impede movement if something's not blocking it on the screen below it. And if there is... ... then cutting the bush and walking through there means you'll have your movement impeded on the next screen as well. So yeah, just fix that up and you're good.
Pokemonmaster64 - I was gonna say it's just an average screen with kind of a monotonous palette, then I discovered what it really was. ... real mature. So I keep my original judgment.
William - Nice screen, though it seems pretty iffy perspective-wise. The frozen "haters" though? Now
that's a good reference. And pretty well executed.
Feenicks - My vote went here. A very nice shot in terms of layout, and I love the palette. It looks pretty smooth. It's just the Link and Octorok sprites that seem to stand out a bit negatively, but it still gets my vote.
Twilight_Knight - Pretty good flow, but the flower tiles seem a bit... well, I dunno. Unnatural? Eh, it's a minor gripe. The shot is nice overall though; nicely done.
CastChaos - The platform on the right seems somewhat odd perspective-wise, but other than that, well, not much to say about it. It's a solid, average dungeon shot. That's all there is too it.
And that wraps it up for this week. Also:
QUOTE(Russ @ Oct 9 2011, 03:13 PM)
I don't have a dirty part of my brain.
Blatant lies.