allb
This is an update of my picture from "Screenshot of the week #645"
I have taken the criticism and embellished my village.
Shoshon the Elegant
Link discovers a hidden lab in the Court of Veils.
Anthus
A gentle storm rolls in.
Orithan
Key Cathedral. A mysterious labyrinth hidden underneath a cathedral. Within the brassy walls you will find treasure... and many traps. Will you brave the dungeon?
xanadude
A world filled with waterfalls and devoid of color and life...
FireSeraphim
"This is gonna suck" Link thinks to himself as he tries to think of a way out.
Screenshot of the Week 647
#1
Posted 28 January 2018 - 11:50 PM
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#3
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:07 AM
Some feedback:
allb: A simple but lovely village shot. Maybe try adding a fence or some kind of object to further indicate this is a village.
Shoshon the Elegant: Definitely feels like an experiment has taken place... A bit cluttered but not too much to detract readability.
Anthus: Voted here, there's something quite charming about this screen.
Orithan: Pretty nice palette and screen, I'm not sure on the stacked walls but they get the job done.
xanadude: It's a nice screen. The waterfall looks like it's falling from the sky instead of falling off the mountain however.
FireSeraphim: Looks pretty brutal. I really love the Face Shrine visuals, although maybe a contrasting coloured floor would be nice.
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#4
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:24 AM
Nulled.
allb: A good improvement. I'm not fond of the vertically stacked trees, and the screen could use some variation.
Shoshon: I like this a lot. Though, up top, the crystals looks odd due to their coloring, and I have no idea what the thing in the middle is. But good stuff.
Anthus: I really like the screen in terms of structure. But I am not a fan of the palette. It looks like their is a film over the whole screen.
Orithan: This is cool, I dig the symmetry of the whole thing. But the stacked walls, like Shane said, are a little jarring.
FireSeraphim: I love the aesthetics and the structure. The only things I don't like is that it seems extremely troublesome and difficult just looking at it. lol
Would've voted for FireSeraphim.
Edited by xanadude, 29 January 2018 - 12:24 AM.
#5
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:26 AM
Shoshon: Wish the secret blocks and pots blended in more.
Anthus: Love the colors and composition.
Orithan: Love the colored floor paths, the wall choice and the symmetry.
xanadude: Love that it's black and white. Pretty well structured, but the waterfall goes down too far. Try bringing the bottom up one tile.
FireSeraphim: Love the atmosphere and colors. The white lines are a bit distracting, from a screenshot sense to me. Looking nice though.
Voting for Orithan.
Edited by Shoshon the Elegant, 29 January 2018 - 12:27 AM.
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#6
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:31 AM
@Shoshon the Elegant: I don't think you're aware of this but there's a certain unspoken rule/gentlemen's agreement among SOTW participants where the submitter don't vote for themselves or their rivals simply to ensure the voting process is fair and unbiased. If I were you I would remove the vote you just made and null your vote, simply because I don't it's a good idea to break the unspoken rule/gentlemen's agreement.
#7
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:34 AM
It's a polite thing to do, but it's not required. You can vote for whoever you want, even yourself.
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#8
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:34 AM
Try bringing the bottom up one tile.
That's how the GB Zeldas were.
https://www.zeldadun...ough/02/041.png
#9
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:37 AM
I BET BLATANT WALL ERRORS ARE OKAY TOO, YOU MONSTER?!
(I don't actually have an opinion on the waterfalls)
#10
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:37 AM
Had to go with Xanadude for a super-appealing screen! I really like it! It has this natural and relaxing feel to it.
The others didn't speak to me, and a certain few seemed rather chaotic with clashing colors and all.
Edited by Cukeman, 29 January 2018 - 12:44 AM.
#12
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:44 AM
Gameboy is the hardest tileset to use correctly. So hard that even Nintendies can't do it.
#14
Posted 29 January 2018 - 12:50 AM
@Shoshon the Elegant: I don't think you're aware of this but there's a certain unspoken rule/gentlemen's agreement among SOTW participants where the submitter don't vote for themselves or their rivals simply to ensure the voting process is fair and unbiased. If I were you I would remove the vote you just made and null your vote, simply because I don't it's a good idea to break the unspoken rule/gentlemen's agreement.
Yup, it's quite alright to do, and it is mentioned in the Screenshot of the Week rules that it's quite alright to do so.It's a polite thing to do, but it's not required. You can vote for whoever you want, even yourself.
Contest schedule and voting
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3. If you enter the contest, you may vote for yourself if you choose. Of course, you may also vote for a competitor or decline to vote altogether.
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#15
Posted 29 January 2018 - 01:25 AM
If I see something I really like, I'll vote for it. Unless it's my own. I also feel people have just as much chance being biased whether in or out.
So I've never gone for that or any unspoken agreement. I have my own honor code I go by. I'm not really the type of person to choose with a biased mindset either.
I'm a very impartial person when it comes to having an opinion on their work.
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