Screenshot of the Week 220
#1
Posted 20 July 2008 - 01:36 PM
*Removed by request*
gray0x
"It's a beach type thing."
Popuri
"Link: I wonder where those stairs lead?"
#2
Posted 20 July 2008 - 01:39 PM
gray0x's is great, too, but I guess I don't like the color of the sand. Nice job with the floating boomerang, btw. ;P
Popuri, you obviously know how to work with trees, and I'll give you that much. Nice job. But it needs more on the ground.
#3
Posted 20 July 2008 - 01:52 PM
BTW, you should've only had the boomerang in the shot if it was easy to see. It's too small and blends in too well with the sand.
#4
Posted 20 July 2008 - 01:53 PM
I really liked /m/'s too though.
#5
Posted 20 July 2008 - 01:53 PM
gray0x - That shot is a miserable piece of crap and can burn in hell
Popuri - bad.
Edited by gray0x, 20 July 2008 - 01:55 PM.
#6
Posted 20 July 2008 - 02:09 PM
Except for that puddle near the middle of the screen looks sorta....like a rotated square.
#7
Posted 20 July 2008 - 02:30 PM
Gray0x- it would've been 10x better if the water was blue, but it's still good enough to get my vote. Good design and detail.
Popuri- the design isn't bad, but the colors and usage of detail is. Try using less repetitive detail tiles, and give the screen something to focus on. Maybe a dirt or stone path, or a house or something. Right now it seems uneventful, and the detail is too repetitive.
#8
Posted 20 July 2008 - 02:37 PM
Edited by gray0x, 20 July 2008 - 02:38 PM.
#9
Posted 20 July 2008 - 02:57 PM
Voted for /M/.
#10
Posted 20 July 2008 - 03:13 PM
However, if you remember your fourth grade, the water reflects off the sky and, for the most part, looks blue. Blue is a better, more cartooney color and would help the contrast in the shot.
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#11
Posted 20 July 2008 - 03:18 PM
Trolling comments not appreciated Gray, I stated my opinion.
However, if you remember your fourth grade, the water reflects off the sky and, for the most part, looks blue. Blue is a better, more cartooney color and would help the contrast in the shot.
It could just be an overcast day...
#12
Posted 20 July 2008 - 03:26 PM
#13
Posted 20 July 2008 - 03:28 PM
gray0x: I love the beaches you make! *Votes*
Popuri: It has too many trees bunched up at the bottom, and not enough on the rest of the screen.
Edit: Lost, water like that would actually appear to be more gray colored than blue.
Edited by Russ, 20 July 2008 - 03:29 PM.
#14
Posted 20 July 2008 - 03:34 PM
#15
Posted 20 July 2008 - 03:36 PM
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