Oh, you're playing my quest first?
I have been watching your streams lately, I am scared and worried... about your feedback...
EDIT: Watched your stream, at least the last half. I listened to your analysis at the end and I'll give you my thoughts here:
I expected at most 2 stars from you, I'm happy that you find potential in this and gave it a 3! Story isn't the most powerful aspects of this quest, but I will try my best on improving it by adding more back-stories to the main characters. In fact, I have already done that later in the quest. I took a long hiatus between levels 2-3, while not spectacular, the story certainly showed significant improvement from there, (the same can also be said for cutscenes) Anyways, I'm planning on reworking the narrative at the beginning, maybe add more cutscenes and stuff, and fixing old errors. I myself felt like the beginning was a bit stale. But since this is just a demo, there's a lot I can do on improving.
As for the style clash, I'm not that great at judging it. I personally find style clash fine for fan games, but a little part of me wishes that I can draw pixilart better. Style clash is very subjective, but I will try my best to make the quest appeal to everyone design-wise.
And for the minor nitpicks, yeah, I don't think they're all that bad. Maybe with the exception of the overworld being a bit disorganized, I have the whole map planned for the game, it's really connected, but in this demo, it really feels tedious to get from point A to B due to the incomplete maps. I'll most certainly work on these problems.
So I'll be fixing the narrative / cutscenes, fixing the overworld / enemies, and hopefully the art as well. Is there any other things you think this quest needs to be at least a 4 / 5 quest?
ps: nice accent btw, are you Swedish? because you sound like it.
Edited by a30502355, 11 October 2016 - 05:33 PM.