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[Popuri]

My site where you can download the quest!

http://www.onyxroseb...Woodensword.bmp
The screen where you get the wooden sword.

http://www.onyxroseb...ord dungeon.bmp
Entrance of the Sword Dungeon

http://www.onyxroseb...ckyminiboss.bmp
Mini-Boss for the Boss Key.

http://www.onyxroseb...blockpuzzle.bmp
The block puzzle!

Ok, I've decided to try to create my own quest. I haven't figured out a name for it yet, so Random shall it be dubbed. This will be the second quest I've ever made if/when I finish it.
I just want some feedback on the design of the quest and tips to make it better.


Credits:
Radien for making the DoR tileset

Edited by Popuri, 13 January 2008 - 09:29 PM.

[Bowser Blanchette]

Version and screenshots please!

[Popuri]

Oh, sorry... I'll edit the first post and get some screenshots. Version 704.

[Popuri]

Edited: Added a website link. Updated quest file for 718, added all the way through Level-1 and part way through Level-2.
Sorry if this is counted as double posting.

[Zenith]

^Nah, the rule is 12 hours, I believe...

Anyway...they're not bad, but a lot of the screens seem too open. They need more in them than just a couple of blocks or torches. The DoR Tileset has a ton of things you can put in for detail. And also, unless you're not using freeform dungeons for some reason, there's no point in making every room the same shape. Mess with the walls, put doors in different places, be creative.

[Popuri]

I'll try and change up the design for Level 3 and put some more detail into the sword dungeon, Level 1, and Level 2 screens.
I am contemplating making 6 Triforce Pieces instead of 3.
Did you find Level 2? I made it a little more "Freeformy." It's in the "Passageway," you have to bomb the wall.
I am also thinking about making an 8x8 overworld instead of what I have going on. Cause I know that forest must be awkward.

Edited by Popuri, 16 January 2008 - 07:30 PM.