13 replies to this topic

[Nate]

Be honest, before I send out the quest, does this look like an alright title screen?
http://i2.photobucke...en/zelda017.bmp
Any feed back is appreciated.

[Mr. Z]

The background needs more colors, it looks strange to see it hop from purple to pink in one step. Maybe you can make it look better if you put the foreground and sky one different layers so you can use more than 1 cset.

And I'd say you should at least give the text an outline or something


Other than that, it looks neat.

[ZeldaLord]

It's quite good, but the color changes in the background look a little weird, it actually looks like there's too much going on. Also, the font doesn't look very interesting (looks like a windows default font).
I'd suggest getting rid of some of the colors around the top of the screen, so it looks less messy, and maybe modifying one of the Zelda title fonts to make yours.

Edited by ZeldaLord, 05 June 2005 - 05:41 AM.

[toaofgamecube]

I like it as it is...

[Shoelace]

I like the tile screen a lot. I don't think that you have to change it, as it looks great. However, if you want it to be perfect, when maybe you can use their suggestions. Though, I wouldn't.

[ShadowTiger]

Seems pretty darn cool to me, man. I like the effort you've put into making it look nice. If you can make the water animated, that would be EVEN COOLER!

* Moving To Design Help *

(That forum is for critiquing.)

[Hergiswi]

I have to agree with everyone else. It really looks excellent, but just add a little more color. (and like Josh said, moving water would be cool. )

[venom343]

ive seen that sunset somewhere before
any way it looks really good just the pink in the sky. when you fix that up itll be perfect

[nicklegends]

You might even want to consider making a sunset CSet (hehe... sounds funny) just for the sky, to put on another layer. I know somebody already said something similar to this, but it really would be useful because you have used up so many colors on the mountains. You could have 16 pinks/oranges! Now THAT would be a sight to behold.

[Papa]

Personally, I would leave the BG as is, but maybe you should try a darker color for the text. Outside of that , I wouldn't change a thing......~~Lee~~

[mudvayne]

the colors are to dark... take a dark blue water, and a light blue sky... but looks really good! take any layers, how mr. z says!

[Theryan]

This is really good... the only thing I can see thats kinda annoying me is the text color. It blends in too well. And if you made it animate, that would be SWEET! But that take too much time. It would be good being still also.

[phil]

I do't like the color of the words "Alyssa's Song" or whatever it said.

[Exate]

The font is a bit dull, and the BG should have more colors as Z said. Regardless, it could make a pretty nice title screen.