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[Ica]

Nightmeres, The design seems a bit awkward and ramdom, the warp is in the way and the trees arrengment is bad.
I'm sorry, but I think a better idea would be to redo it.

[Mero]

Any comments?

[Moon]

All I have to say is, right now the Dmap title is really living up to its name.

Try adding some candles or some statues and it will look great

(Maybe a few pits also?)

[Mero]

Do you think the wind switches on the wall look bad. Your suppose to use the deku leaf to activate them.



Better or worst?

[Nightmeres]

Nightmeres, The design seems a bit awkward and ramdom, the warp is in the way and the trees arrengment is bad.
I'm sorry, but I think a better idea would be to redo it.

Tried to make it look like the ground was above a forest, I guess i didn't pull it of correctly, i'll try to redo it.

[Marco]

Time's Up

[Moon]

Another sneek peek:

[Marco]

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your shot is well rounded, balanced. The flow is splendid, and the available room is perfect in ratio to solids. However, that stump is like, HI GUYS. I recommend moving it up a tile, so it doesn't interfere with movement. Perhaps a slight add of contrasting color will unify the screen, as its single color monotone is a bit...repetitive.

[Shane]

Another sneek peek:

To much green. Well, at least 1 type of green, it's sooo boring when you use it all over the place and not use any other colour. The layout is good, certainly reminds me of your Pure Selhera Forest.

Okay all in fairness there is brown but, it's kinda not helping the screen look colourful. Also subscreen and sprite colours don't count imo.

Edited by Shane, 19 November 2011 - 08:37 PM.

[Jared]

[Moon]

The layout is good, certainly reminds me of your Pure Selhera Forest.

Maybe that's because this screen is an edit of one of my screens in my old Selhera Forest

Looks great Jared, I would love to have those trees.

Edited by Yoshidude, 19 November 2011 - 08:42 PM.

[Shane]

Maybe that's because this screen is an edit of one of my screens in my old Selhera Forest

Well, that explains it. Can you mix up the greens with red, blue and such? It looks dull when you have green grass, trees, overhang etc.

[Moon]

I added more colors.

[Marco]

I added more colors.

Beautiful now! The contrasting shades give the forest a surreal feel with a touch of gloom.

[Shane]

I added more colors.

Can you change palettes? I dunno why but the palette here is just dull looking and makes the screen's colours look terrible under the shadow overhang. Try the "forest 2" palette that would make it look better.

Edited by Shane, 20 November 2011 - 05:00 PM.