The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#1216
Posted 02 November 2011 - 01:19 AM
#1217
Posted 02 November 2011 - 08:06 PM
#1218
Posted 02 November 2011 - 08:14 PM
http://2.bp.blogspot...sAwakening2.png
Edited by Cukeman, 02 November 2011 - 08:14 PM.
#1219
Posted 02 November 2011 - 08:15 PM

It looks okay. Design is pretty simple and linear, but the detail seems fine. Colors are pretty average for winter, I'd say. If you want to make GB screen stick out, I'd recommend putting some good design elements into your screens. This screen, for instance, is really lacking some great design. Nonetheless, the screen looks fine.
#1220
Posted 03 November 2011 - 05:34 AM

Meh, I don't like when people mix grasses on one layer and leave blank spots on the white/yellow grass layer. Do it the way Nintendo did then use in their GB games. Click Here, that's how I would do it. Also the I would replace the rounded tall grass with the square grass also watch how they do there grass, sort of patterned I would go for that too.
#1221
Posted 04 November 2011 - 05:44 PM
#1222
Posted 04 November 2011 - 05:59 PM
#1223
Posted 04 November 2011 - 06:29 PM
Did I make the waterfall correctly?

The bottom of the waterfall should be up a tile. And plus it seems you ignore my feedback so I'm not bothering to comment on your work unless you need help.
Edited by Shane, 04 November 2011 - 06:29 PM.
#1224
Posted 04 November 2011 - 07:01 PM
#1225
Posted 04 November 2011 - 07:10 PM
#1226
Posted 04 November 2011 - 07:12 PM
The bottom of the waterfall should be up a tile. And plus it seems you ignore my feedback so I'm not bothering to comment on your work unless you need help.
Well, maybe he doesn't need help.
Or he just didn't like the idea of what you suggested.
OR you haven't given him a chance to even take said advise into consideration.
No need to give up all hope on him
(Although I've lived with him for *** years, and he doesn't take advise all that offten
I tell him to add more grass as the yellow dirt looks really bad covering up alot of the screen.
That's just what I think would spice the screen up.
#1227
Posted 04 November 2011 - 07:15 PM
Well, maybe he doesn't need help.
Or he just didn't like the idea of what you suggested.
OR you haven't given him a chance to even take said advise into consideration.
Well *points at the thread title*
Well then if that's the case then that's fine by me but I rather see GB used how Nintendo did theirs.
Well he that's the case then he didn't respond saying he hasn't gotten around to it yet. Keep in mind I'm not in the same house as him.
#1228
Posted 04 November 2011 - 07:19 PM
Edited by Yoshidude, 04 November 2011 - 07:21 PM.
#1229
Posted 04 November 2011 - 07:21 PM
#1230
Posted 04 November 2011 - 07:32 PM
Well *points at the thread title*
Well then if that's the case then that's fine by me but I rather see GB used how Nintendo did theirs.
Well he that's the case then he didn't respond saying he hasn't gotten around to it yet. Keep in mind I'm not in the same house as him.
Fair enough.
And just to point out Shane, I wasn't pissed or anything when putting to bolder "OR" at the end.
Just for enthusiasm, you know
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