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#826 Alestance

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 09:33 PM

QUOTE(Rafael @ Aug 17 2011, 09:32 AM) View Post

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I've been messing around with some stuff lately and I think I'm going to make a quest. The screen design is unimportant to me because it probably won't stay.

Things I plan to change:
-The bushes will be leafier.
-Grass change.
-I don't know.


Ok, man, where the heck have you been? This design, these graphics. Superb. Keep up the good work, and if this is a glorious return? Best way to do it. Welcome back, stay a while, and keep up doing this, it is shaping up to be an excellent tileset.

#827 Jared

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 09:41 PM

QUOTE(Midnight_King @ Aug 20 2011, 10:06 PM) View Post

Here is a beach shot from me:
Click Here!
(A Zquest shot because I haven't set the Dmap up bare with me here.)


Very nice! I love the palm trees, and the coconut! icon_biggrin.gif

#828 Ventus

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 09:48 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Aug 20 2011, 08:56 PM) View Post

Thank you! I changed it up a bit, again though.
Do you have anything of interest Ben?

What do you mean interest, Of Course i have interest
I what to know What the rest of that dungeon looks like
Badly:D

#829 Jared

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 09:51 PM

No, I meant pictures of YOURS! icon_razz.gif
And only 4 screens are done, you're not missing out on much XD

#830 Ventus

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Posted 20 August 2011 - 09:56 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Aug 20 2011, 09:51 PM) View Post

No, I meant pictures of YOURS! icon_razz.gif
And only 4 screens are done, you're not missing out on much XD

OH my screen shots XD
Sorry I have no Screen shots Right now...

#831 Shane

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Posted 21 August 2011 - 10:47 AM

QUOTE(Jared @ Aug 21 2011, 12:11 PM) View Post

Very nice! I love the palm trees, and the coconut! icon_biggrin.gif

Oh look a reply xD. Thanks been hard at work ripping these.

#832 Feenicks

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Posted 21 August 2011 - 05:44 PM

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Going to have to change the roof tiles and draw some NPCs to spruce up this bit of the overworld, but...
[also, me working on zc stuff what is this]

#833 Ica

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Posted 22 August 2011 - 01:20 PM

That screen is great and I love the tiles, but in my opnion, those Link tiles dont fit thehouse ones. Also, the screen feels quite squary, change the montains a bit and add some water details (yeah, i know there are none for classic, but you drew the houses, bushes, etc. already...)

#834 Moo2wo

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Posted 24 August 2011 - 06:18 PM

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Yup. A forest.


#835 Jared

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Posted 24 August 2011 - 06:22 PM

I like it! But personally, the colors are a bit strange for a forest, which should be lush and filled with life. Nonetheless, I love the design!
But then again, I like the colors...
The two mushrooms on the right are the same and lined up with each other. Kinda weird xD

Edited by Jared, 24 August 2011 - 06:22 PM.


#836 Moo2wo

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Posted 24 August 2011 - 06:32 PM

Oh yeah, I'll fix the issue with the 'shrooms. I could have sworn I took extra care not to do that. xD

I like the palette, myself, but if you know of a better one I'm very open to suggestions. Right now it uses an edited version of Radien's "Autumn" palette.

Thanks for the compliments!


#837 Jared

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Posted 24 August 2011 - 06:33 PM

I think you should edit the browns/oranges to be a liiiittle more green. As it is right now, it looks kind of dead.

#838 Bourkification

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Posted 24 August 2011 - 08:04 PM

I say leave it like that, it looks different to every other forest that uses the same old palette. I like it.

#839 Moo2wo

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Posted 24 August 2011 - 08:13 PM

I did brighten it a tiny bit, and I changed the treetops to the ones you sent me the other day. icon_razz.gif Two changes for the better, I think.

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#840 Sheik

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Posted 25 August 2011 - 04:58 AM

Seriously, Moo, you're screens have increased in quality so much since you started working on your new project I can barely believe it's still the same person making those screens. And I just love your palettes. It's like a breath of fresh air in PZC's recent Pure Remembrance craze where every quest being made looks like the other.
Your tileplacement is also fantastic, I can't remember the last time where I thought "Wow, now this is layed out kinda odd." looking at your screens.
Two thumbs way up.

Edited by Sheik91, 27 August 2011 - 05:24 PM.



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