The brush definitely needs changing, but otherwise, it looks wonderful
The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#811
Posted 17 August 2011 - 02:52 PM
The brush definitely needs changing, but otherwise, it looks wonderful
#812
Posted 20 August 2011 - 11:09 AM

(I would also like a opinion on my screen)
#813
Posted 20 August 2011 - 11:24 AM
Edited by Dawnlight, 20 August 2011 - 11:25 AM.
#814
Posted 20 August 2011 - 11:28 AM
#815
Posted 20 August 2011 - 11:30 AM
#816
Posted 20 August 2011 - 11:33 AM
But thank you for the suggestion.
Edited by Yoshidude, 20 August 2011 - 11:34 AM.
#817
Posted 20 August 2011 - 11:48 AM
Edited by Sheik91, 20 August 2011 - 12:42 PM.
#818
Posted 20 August 2011 - 11:51 AM
#819
Posted 20 August 2011 - 06:10 PM

I'm thinking of making borders for the green poison, or whatever it is. Good idea?
Edited by Jared, 20 August 2011 - 06:12 PM.
#821
Posted 20 August 2011 - 06:20 PM
#822
Posted 20 August 2011 - 07:02 PM
Made a BUNCH of borders! I also made a few "dots" so it looks like it's coming out of the walls! I also edited the orange "Fat" things to look a bit better. I'm proud of myself!
I actually like your idea of toning down the green, Ica. I'll consider it
#823
Posted 20 August 2011 - 07:06 PM
Made a BUNCH of borders! I also made a few "dots" so it looks like it's coming out of the walls! I also edited the orange "Fat" things to look a bit better. I'm proud of myself!
I actually like your idea of toning down the green, Ica. I'll consider it
wow that looks 100% better
Good job
#824
Posted 20 August 2011 - 08:56 PM
Do you have anything of interest Ben?
#825
Posted 20 August 2011 - 09:06 PM
Do I use the mountains right?

(I would also like a opinion on my screen)
First of all the palette looks a bit washed out. Why not try Elive's palettes that were included in the PR tileset? Second the way the river just ends on the edge of the screen looks less natural and looks more artificial I suggest you keep the river going upwards. Now I would removed the trees on the bottom left and replace it with a fenced area that way the you could move that chicken in there so it has more breathing space. Then replace that cramped pen with a tree. Other then that it looks amazing.
EDIT: Also the mountains are a *tad* straight brake the straightness near the forest brush area.
Here is a beach shot from me:
Click Here!
(A Zquest shot because I haven't set the Dmap up bare with me here.)
Edited by Midnight_King, 20 August 2011 - 09:18 PM.
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