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#7546 Geoffrey

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Posted 05 November 2017 - 04:20 PM

Hot diggity dog! Are those NoeL's tiles?



#7547 Jared

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Posted 05 November 2017 - 04:48 PM

Yep! He released the tileset in his database entry!



#7548 Anthus

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Posted 05 November 2017 - 05:22 PM

I also made some screens with NoeL's Linked Seasons set. It's like, a SNES version of Koten. I like it a lot, and these are some experimental screens. The mountains in the waterfall one might not be to everyone's taste, but I think it kind of works.

 

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#7549 Geoffrey

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Posted 05 November 2017 - 06:13 PM

And I was about to ask him if I could use it! That's awesome. :)


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#7550 Saffith

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Posted 06 November 2017 - 03:46 PM

I wouldn't call this anywhere near done, but does it generally work, do you think?

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#7551 Sheik

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Posted 06 November 2017 - 04:01 PM

Yeah, I do think it works. Maybe you should consider using a different tree sprite? I could imagine Fire Bird trees looking decent here.

And while the palette is pretty good I think moving the dirt and rock colors closer to each other would make for smoother transitions. (I'll add an example in spoiler tags.)

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#7552 Anthus

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Posted 06 November 2017 - 04:26 PM

Huh, yeah, that little change Sheik made makes it really pop. I like it. The gray cliff looks a little odd at first, but it is hardly impossible. Mmm, look at all those tasty pancakes.



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Posted 06 November 2017 - 10:46 PM

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Hey, that looks familiar. :lol:
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#7554 Deedee

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Posted 06 November 2017 - 10:54 PM

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Not from a project. Wish they were. Not really looking for critique, just showing off a lot of my custom stuff I made out of boredom that probably are never going to be seen in an actual project. *shrugs*

Too much blue. The second shot looks like it's partly underwater. Orange flowers look odd. Second screen looks cramped and unplayable.

Sorry, I wish I could vote for this but I just can't.  :shrug:


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#7555 Sheik

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Posted 07 November 2017 - 03:58 PM

Something old again:

 

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#7556 Moonbread

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Posted 07 November 2017 - 04:43 PM

Individual screens instead of the whole messy map.

 

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Oh yeah PS, quest name is Of Gold and Silver


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#7557 Sheik

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Posted 07 November 2017 - 05:23 PM

So, here's the first screen of a new quest:

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It isn't the first screen of the game, though.

Here's another screen.

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Considering skipping class to keep mapping.


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#7558 Sheik

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Posted 08 November 2017 - 09:21 AM

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#7559 NoeL

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Posted 08 November 2017 - 08:55 PM

So much LS! :lol: Looking good guys, keep it up (though Shiek, you've got some cset 3 ("Blue") mountain tiles in a predominantly cset 2 ("Red") mountainscape (the SW-facing corner just left of the upper central house, and the middle of the N-facing side of the central hill. Also just noticed an incorrect tile at the bottom of the stairs in the lower left of the map)).


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#7560 Shoshon the Elegant

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Posted 08 November 2017 - 09:08 PM

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A mostly completed level 2.


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