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#691 Jared

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Posted 24 July 2011 - 11:33 PM

Got rid of the water. All they did was heal you. And that's what you have pots and skulls for.

It looks better with torches, too. Thanks DLT icon_smile.gif

Also, there are absolutely no other windows I can use. I can't find any.

#692 Shane

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 01:18 AM

QUOTE(Yoshidude @ Jul 25 2011, 01:28 PM) View Post

It's good, but it's just a typical dungeon entrance.


All dungeon entrances are always typical. So you are right, but there is nothing Jared (or anyone) can't do about it. Jared that screen looks fantastic! A thing you should do is place a border around the puddles that's all on my side.



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Posted 25 July 2011 - 01:24 AM

Thanks MK!

I updated it, and here's some more!

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Yes, those are chains hanging from the ceiling icon_smile.gif

Still working on them icon_smile.gif

#694 William

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 01:28 AM

QUOTE(Midnight_King @ Jul 25 2011, 01:18 AM) View Post

All dungeon entrances are always typical. So you are right, but there is nothing Jared (or anyone) can't do about it.

Actually, I am inclined to agree with Yoshidude. I disagree that there is nothing you can do to make a dungeon entrance "non typical". In fact, I've seen plenty of cool and innovative things done to dungeon entrances that make them different, cool, pleasant looking and a step above the rest.

#695 Omega

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 01:46 AM

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This is the entrance to my Dragon Shrine. Both stairs go to different parts of the dungeon, and both message blocks are scripted and work like they are made to work.



#696 Shane

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 02:01 AM

QUOTE(William @ Jul 25 2011, 03:58 PM) View Post

Actually, I am inclined to agree with Yoshidude. I disagree that there is nothing you can do to make a dungeon entrance "non typical". In fact, I've seen plenty of cool and innovative things done to dungeon entrances that make them different, cool, pleasant looking and a step above the rest.


I guess your right about that. I no longer rest my case. But now that I look at the improved screen I disagree with Yoshi about the screen being typical. In fact all the screens Jared made are amazing the colour scheme and feel reminds me of Link's Awakening Level 4.

Edited by Midnight_King, 25 July 2011 - 02:01 AM.


#697 Jared

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 02:13 AM

Thank you, Shane icon_smile.gif
All I can say, is that you won't be disappointed icon_wink.gif

Franky, I like the design. But the door entrance thing is messed up; you need your wall tiles one more straight.

Edited by Jared, 25 July 2011 - 02:14 AM.


#698 Omega

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 02:35 AM

QUOTE(Jared @ Jul 25 2011, 12:13 AM) View Post

Thank you, Shane icon_smile.gif
All I can say, is that you won't be disappointed icon_wink.gif

Franky, I like the design. But the door entrance thing is messed up; you need your wall tiles one more straight.
I like it how it is, its either this way or the eyes gone. Which doesn't look as good. Thanks for the input though.


#699 Jared

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 03:15 AM

Well, could you put pillars there instead? icon_smile.gif

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 07:48 AM

I think your screens are just fine Jared. I find absolutely nothing wrong with them. They aren't 100% perfect, but they are pretty much way up there on the scale. You just keep better and better my boy icon_wink.gif

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 08:28 AM

It's a great screen, but I see style clashing. The lttp dungeon entrance and skull statues stand out and kind clash with everything else.
Besides that, once again, it's a great screen. icon_smile.gif

#702 Nightmeres

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Posted 25 July 2011 - 08:52 AM

OK I made this map a while ago and was wondering what you people think.

the things in the wall are machines

a cave map

Edited by Nightmeres, 25 July 2011 - 08:56 AM.


#703 Orithan

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Posted 26 July 2011 - 05:11 AM

Another teaser of my new sideproject:

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Here I am in the Sakura Temple, without any armour upgrade. Expect to fight plenty of Wizzrobes in this temple. They are weakened, but you need to exercise caution; as there a couple of Anima Wizzrobes among the threats. They summon flames, that tribble into Firerobes. Please note that you can have the armour upgrade before getting in the temple.



#704 Shane

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Posted 26 July 2011 - 06:00 AM

QUOTE(Orin XD @ Jul 26 2011, 07:41 PM) View Post

Another teaser of my new sideproject:

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Here I am in the Sakura Temple, without any armour upgrade. Expect to fight plenty of Wizzrobes in this temple. They are weakened, but you need to exercise caution; as there a couple of Anima Wizzrobes among the threats. They summon flames, that tribble into Firerobes. Please note that you can have the armour upgrade before getting in the temple.


Nice, but the floor kills it for me also what is in front of that locked door? Flowers?

#705 Orithan

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Posted 26 July 2011 - 06:16 AM

As for the floor, it's a problem with the Outlands dungeon set - they only have doors avalible for this type of ground.

Also, the little pink things on the floor are cherry petals - this place is supposed to be full of cherry blossoms and was inspired by Touhou 7, spefificaly Stage 5. Also, this is supposed to be Level 3 of 4.




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