QUOTE(PowerGauntlets @ Sep 24 2010, 07:02 PM)

Cool! Like the design!
Also, as much as I respect Lemon, it's not really about what he likes.

I think a lot of us would be extremely disappointed if you DIDN'T post it.
I still firmly stand that putting a tail, ears, and fur on otherwise bad anime characters makes them have more character, personality, etc. but eh. Another time.
One of the big problems, is that you're not really that good yet. You might be in the future, but right now I feel like I'm criticizing a middle schooler for not painting a Michelangelo or something. I can hope to steer you in the right direction though... which would be to stop taking inspiration from bad furry art and instead start doing drawings of naked humans. Or actual animals. Or real objects. You can always simplify, but once you dig yourself into a pit of bad anime style, you'll have a hard time coming out of (especially if you are on sites like Deviantart which are just horrid, horrid, horrid places full of stupid people who will offer nothing but encouragement instead of much needed critiques). By having a perfect thing in front of you, (and by perfect I mean real) you'll be forced t learn structure, line placement, all that wonderful stuff that most people won't/don't learn.
As for the picture, eh. The wings are kinda tacky, no idea what the background is besides hastily done, hair coloring is also quickly done and pillow shaded- how the oats is he wearing that hat- back pockets on pants look quickly tacked on too.All in all slow down maybe? Base this stuff off real life photos or something. You'll get better pictures and learn more. Your imagination is not to be trusted!
Hah. This thread may be my baby, but feel free to post whatever you want. I'm going to critique the oats out of it, but it won't kill me.