The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#6976
Posted 28 April 2016 - 09:55 PM
#6977
Posted 28 April 2016 - 09:57 PM
#6978
Posted 28 April 2016 - 10:11 PM
Sephiroth, it looks great. If you're more concerned about finishing the dungeon, I say go for that instead. Personally I did like the "ice dungeon" palette the most, but it's your quest and ultimately your satisfaction is more important than our's. And that's not to say your latest palette is bad, it looks better than the original vision for certain, so good job!
content schmontent! hasn't the long parade of screenshots from projects never completed taught you...?
Umm... say what now? lol
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#6979
Posted 28 April 2016 - 10:13 PM
Sephiroth, your new palette looks really great! It's a perfect balance, I feel like. Well done!
Otherwise, I think the tile you chose for the floors looks a little weird. Like your red border things are going over the square tiles weirdly. I don't know how to explain it.
Edited by Jared, 29 April 2016 - 12:01 PM.
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#6980
Posted 28 April 2016 - 11:29 PM
#6982
Posted 29 April 2016 - 04:38 AM
Something like cog wheels might work. Kind of like the Great Bay temple.
There must not nessecarily be something on the walls, though.
...well, there's the big fishes that were on the mountains of the LA overworld close to Angler's Tunnel. That might work, too.
Edited by Sheik, 29 April 2016 - 04:39 AM.
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#6984
Posted 29 April 2016 - 08:22 AM
Sephiroth, I think your latest take on the palette is the best of them all. Love that true blue and the purple ground. Looks like it'll be a cool water dungeon.
Shane, your dungeon looks really interesting too. Didn't see this one coming! I like the pipes, and I think the walls would be fine even without any decorations.
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#6985
Posted 29 April 2016 - 10:18 AM
Well, here's my second dungeon. Not sure what I can add to the walls - I don't want to use torches for the walls or floor.
Maybe little waterfalls (like, 6x10) along the walls? And you can have empty holes for the drained areas.
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#6987
Posted 29 April 2016 - 01:59 PM
Perfect. ... Just perfect. Excellent work, Shane.
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#6988
Posted 29 April 2016 - 02:11 PM
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#6989
Posted 29 April 2016 - 02:14 PM
I really like the atmosphere in your shot, Shane. I can just hear the great bay temple theme in my head by looking at it!
That's good, because that's what this dungeon uses. ![]()
Thank you both! I can't wait to get this dungeon started.
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#6990
Posted 29 April 2016 - 02:24 PM
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