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#6826 Shane

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Posted 27 March 2016 - 09:56 AM

Not really looking for screen critique (since screen is unfinished) but I would like some advice on these tiles:

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Making the dungeon walls have LttP proportions. Not sure how to about with the doors which is why I'm posting here. Also another thing is should I make the room shape more oval? I'm trying to go for a MC tree interior shape, to put it simple.

 

e: Actually, I might change back to standard wall sizes.

 

e2:

 

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#6827 Sheik

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Posted 27 March 2016 - 10:08 AM

Not a fan of the big walls. You could make them 8 pixels higher and get away with it, but this looks off to me.


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#6828 Shane

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Posted 27 March 2016 - 10:13 AM

Not a fan of the big walls. You could make them 8 pixels higher and get away with it, but this looks off to me.

Yeah, I started to feel the same honestly. I'm just going back to basic 16x16-sized walls just to save myself some time and effort. :P


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#6829 Jared

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Posted 27 March 2016 - 08:25 PM

 

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I'm loving it, Shane. I thought the high walls looked fine though. I love the rats too. Also, I see what you did there with the potions. Very sneaky. :P


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#6830 Sheik

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Posted 28 March 2016 - 07:20 AM

can i has old firebird map? yes you do.

 

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Honestly, I don't know when I made this or why. If every time I did a random no good map I actually made it in the same quest file I would have at least one full quest of junk maps by now. I mean, that's basically 50% of what I do in ZQ anyways for the past seven years.


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#6831 Mibbitable

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Posted 29 March 2016 - 11:08 PM

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I'm getting used to this program again. What do you guys think of this? It's nothing much really, I just think it looks pretty.


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#6832 Jared

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 12:42 AM

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I'm getting used to this program again. What do you guys think of this? It's nothing much really, I just think it looks pretty.

 

This is spectacular. Nice amount of detailing and great screen flow. Makes me wanna play it!!

 

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Finally, I found Castle Town...


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#6833 Joelmacool

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 09:30 AM

Original: http://i.imgur.com/EK0E1fU.png

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Messing around with tilesets because I'm bored. It's what I do ;)


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#6834 Demonlink

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 01:01 PM

This is spectacular. Nice amount of detailing and great screen flow. Makes me wanna play it!!

 

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Finally, I found Castle Town...

Excellent work as always dear Jared! However, my only tip would be to make the bridge a bit wider. It looks kinda weird for it to be so small when you're about to enter a full city like landscape. Nonetheless, WHEN CAN I PLAY IT!?  :tard: 

 

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Messing around with tilesets because I'm bored. It's what I do ;)

Hell, I haven't seen caves made as well with DoR like that. 10 out of 5 friend, looks pretty good! :D


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#6835 Jared

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 01:06 PM

Excellent work as always dear Jared! However, my only tip would be to make the bridge a bit wider. It looks kinda weird for it to be so small when you're about to enter a full city like landscape. Nonetheless, WHEN CAN I PLAY IT!?  :tard: 

 

Thank you very much, Miguel!! I agree with the bridge, it does look a tad odd. And very true. I also need to find a new bridge, as I don't really like that one a lot. :P

 

When can you play it? That's for me to know, and for you to hopefully find out someday soon. ;)


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#6836 Joelmacool

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Posted 30 March 2016 - 01:21 PM

Hell, I haven't seen caves made as well with DoR like that. 10 out of 5 friend, looks pretty good! :D

Thanks! :D 


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#6837 Jared

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Posted 31 March 2016 - 04:27 PM

Meh, why not post this here? :)

 

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Screenshot: Challenge Accepted version of a screen in my quest! In the quest, it'll look a tiny bit different. Just a few tiles. :)


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#6838 Matthew

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Posted 31 March 2016 - 04:39 PM

Nice screen Jared! The concentrated vines look a bit off though.
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#6839 Jared

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Posted 31 March 2016 - 06:30 PM

I fixed it. Thank you for the comment! It looks much better now. :)


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#6840 Sheik

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Posted 01 April 2016 - 03:59 PM

"So, Sheik, why don't you post some more of your old maps of crappy projects that never made it past two weeks of existence and whose ideas you still keep recycling in everything you ever make anymore?"

Sure, why not.

 

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