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#6781 CDi-Fails

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Posted 14 March 2016 - 03:17 PM

Nice screen, Shane, I like that a lot. Wonder what sort of books there are inside the library... maybe magic spell books? Probably not.



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Posted 14 March 2016 - 03:58 PM

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An ancient library, forgotten and mysterious, sitting on top of a mountain.

 

I like it alot! Palette, layout and details are nice. There's something with the mountain that doesn't look right to me though:

 

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I've done a minor improvement on my S:CA screen, based on Eddy's suggestion. The main difference is that I removed the grass tiles.

 

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#6783 Eddy

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Posted 14 March 2016 - 04:00 PM

The new ground detail looks much better in the improved shot. Now it looks more like an underwater shot.


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#6784 Shane

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Posted 15 March 2016 - 03:00 AM

Nice screen, Shane, I like that a lot. Wonder what sort of books there are inside the library... maybe magic spell books? Probably not.

I imagine the library will have spell books to help solve puzzles or gain hints. Thanks!

 

I like it alot! Palette, layout and details are nice. There's something with the mountain that doesn't look right to me though:

 

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I've done a minor improvement on my S:CA screen, based on Eddy's suggestion. The main difference is that I removed the grass tiles.

 

xBijmSo.png -> 5cOqcC9.png

As for your screen critique, it's much appreciated. Sadly these are the only tiles appropriate to merge mountains together like that, but maybe I will make my own tiles/find an alternative solution to make them look better? IDK yet. :(

 

Nice improvements. Minor as they are, the screen looks much nicer now. I wonder what the lady is doing over there lol.


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#6785 Lüt

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Posted 17 March 2016 - 12:54 PM

I wonder what the lady is doing over there lol.

Drowning, I'd imagine :P

 

But I'll agree with the rest - the original floors looked more like a recently-flooded overworld field, while the new muddy/sandy look feels like the place has been underwater for a while.



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Posted 17 March 2016 - 03:57 PM

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The final showdown between the Hero of Courage and the King of Evil.


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Posted 19 March 2016 - 11:23 PM

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Trying to give Kakariko a different kind of feel in my quest! On the bottom right, you can see my edited "wooden" roof tiles. I really like them! Let me know what you think. :)


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#6788 Jared

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 12:19 PM

Sorry for the double post, but I'm on a roll today. :)

 

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Started and cleaned up my first shot of castle town. I made the brick benches myself! I'm not happy with the Triforces on the road. They will do until I make/find replacements, though.

 

Special thanks to Shane for inspiration! :love:


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#6789 Shane

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 05:18 PM

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Here's my screen. Obviously Jared's is far superior since the palette and detail make his screen far more appealing, but I thought I would share this screen cause I thought it had some neat ideas going on for a simple Firebird castle town. 


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#6790 MoscowModder

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 05:42 PM

All three of those town screens look really nice in their own ways. But where are the people? Unless they're all in the next screen over, it looks like we've got a set of ghost towns.

 

Still great looking screens though.


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#6791 Shane

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 05:52 PM

> No NPCs in Firebird.

 

RIP. :U


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Posted 20 March 2016 - 07:23 PM

> No NPCs in Firebird.

 

RIP. :U

Welp, there's your new project. Firebird NPCs. Go!

 

(I don't use Firebird so that's not actually a request)


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#6793 TheLegend_njf

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 07:38 PM

why not just import NPCs from another tileset?
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#6794 Shane

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Posted 20 March 2016 - 08:12 PM

Maybe, I just find that incredibly lazy though. However, I will probably revamp the GB NPCs to fit with Firebird similar to the enemies and Link himself. Right now though I was just messing around with Firebird to give Jared (and myself) some ideas for his Castle Town.


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Posted 21 March 2016 - 07:46 PM

Hyrule Castle and the Outset Hills:

 

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You have seen this before, I know, but not in this tileset. I might have commited to it as well. Never know, though.
 


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