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#6736 Nightmeres

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Posted 22 February 2016 - 01:52 PM

http://imgur.com/XCBNyZo I made a screen, broken house on the left courteously of Russ.  @Jarred, sweet screen is it secret of manna, xenoblade or chrono trigger 



#6737 Jared

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Posted 22 February 2016 - 07:11 PM

http://imgur.com/XCBNyZo I made a screen, broken house on the left courteously of Russ.  @Jarred, sweet screen is it secret of manna, xenoblade or chrono trigger 

 

Sadly, your screen is very hard to see with the thick, dense fog over it. :/

 

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Posted 22 February 2016 - 07:17 PM

Sadly, your screen is very hard to see with the thick, dense fog over it. :/

Yeah, you should probably make the fog layer transparent so you can actually see things.



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Posted 22 February 2016 - 08:01 PM

http://imgur.com/h34vx28 here it is transparent, though it wont be in game



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Posted 22 February 2016 - 09:38 PM

Then what's the point? You can't see anything...



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Posted 22 February 2016 - 10:06 PM

It's probably more visible when it's animated. But even so, I'd think it would probably look better translucent.



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Posted 22 February 2016 - 10:08 PM

It's probably more visible when it's animated. But even so, I'd think it would most absolutely definitely look loads better translucent.

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#6743 Nightmeres

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Posted 22 February 2016 - 10:19 PM

then i will stick with translucent then


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Posted 23 February 2016 - 12:31 AM

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continued mucking about with new, quickly-drawn tiles
still need to figure out what sort of character I'm going to replace Link with

No one mentioned how cool the mountains look? They give a strong impression that they have some semblance perspective/depth. I hope that's intentional and I'm not going crazy lol.

http://imgur.com/h34vx28 here it is transparent, though it wont be in game

I think you should find simpler fog/mist tiles. I can't really see much of the screen detail thanks to the detailed fog/mist on top. Maybe try the alternative fog/mist tiles in Lost Isle? The ones that are seen in the forest map.

From what I can make out though, it looks solid.
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Posted 24 February 2016 - 02:00 PM

then i will stick with translucent then

Good choice. Fog is rarely bright in the day, and to have such bright purple fog in what looks like a late-evening setting, wouldn't work from a visual design standpoint alone, not to mention being an obstacle to following the on-screen action while actually playing the game.



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Posted 25 February 2016 - 07:23 PM

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I finally made the switch to Imgur!


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Posted 26 February 2016 - 12:41 PM

I like your screens, Jared. I'm loving the atmosphere of the second shot the most.


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Posted 26 February 2016 - 04:34 PM

I like your screens, Jared. I'm loving the atmosphere of the second shot the most.

Thank you, Shane! I appreciate it very much.

 

I forgot to upload the updated shot!

 

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Thanks to Shane for helping me with the dead grass variety. I think it came out very nice!


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Posted 27 February 2016 - 02:17 AM

I think that the GBC walls on that shot kind of clash a little bit because of how prominently they use black compared to every other tile in that picture. Maybe if you replaced most of the black with a darker shade of brown and use it more like how the left/right facing cliffs use it, it would blend together a bit better?



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Posted 27 February 2016 - 03:56 AM

I think that the GBC walls on that shot kind of clash a little bit because of how prominently they use black compared to every other tile in that picture. Maybe if you replaced most of the black with a darker shade of brown and use it more like how the left/right facing cliffs use it, it would blend together a bit better?

I disagree, myself, and think it's fine how it is. I think the black helps define it more and brings out a more "man-made vs nature" vibe to how it contrasts with everything else on the screen. That's just me though. Ultimately it is up to Jared. :P
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