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[Shane]

 

After a short journey through the Waterfall Cave, our new hero finds a treasure chest! Lucky!

 

 

I finally finished the majority of the cave tiles! All that remains are editing water details and torches, mostly.

Didn't Minish Cap have interior waterfalls? If I find the sprites, it might be a cool addition to the set. Fantastic screen too, it strikes a perfect balance of colour. Maybe somehow make the roof less monochrome? I don't know. Maybe rocks in the water too?

 

Dimention, I prefer the first, but the ice in the third shot looks nicer.

 

Joel, that gray tree is a bit odd, but I dig either way.

[FalsePower]

Working on my title screen right now. I finally have it shrunk down enough so that I can use it in ZQuest. My only problem now is trying to compress it further to reach the 25kb limit.

Does this look decent enough? If there is any way I can improve this, I'm up for any suggestions.

[Eddy]

Holy crap, that is one really cool title screen. The Ganon in the background with the city near the front matches up really well. I haven't really got any critiques for this, it's great.

[Theryan]

That's a really cool title screen, love the concept. The only possible improvement I can think of would be to fade the colors on Ganon to make it blend a little better, but that might end up looking weird.

[Moonbread]

 

After a short journey through the Waterfall Cave, our new hero finds a treasure chest! Lucky!

 

 

I finally finished the majority of the cave tiles! All that remains are editing water details and torches, mostly.

That subscreen is awful, 1/10

 

(But really, it all looks nice so far.)

[trudatman]

so cool. I'd like to get one of my projects to be made of screens similar to that in realism.

[Jared]

Updated the caves with much needed tiles! However, I think I put some of the tiles in the wrong order. Gotta fix it. >_<

 

 

Edit- Wow, fixing the order of the tiles was a lot easier than I expected!

Edited by Jared, 07 September 2015 - 09:09 PM.

[Shane]

I'm loving the changes. It looks like it has a lot of depth to it now!

 

What's up with the black though? I assume it's either oddly coloured grass, a pit or a black liquid?

[Jared]

Oh, that black was supposed to be a hole. But those tiles are fixed now anyways! Thank you for the feedback.

[Jared]

[FalsePower]

y u so good Jared?

That almost looks like something right from Nintendo. I'm assuming that's the reflection of the trees on the ice. Looks nice.

[Eddy]

Man, I'm getting more and more jealous whenever I look at your screens. You make them look so amazing. That screen is no exception, good work yet again.

[Shane]

"Good. You've arrived."

[Eddy]

The overall atmosphere for this screen is perfect. I love it.

[FalsePower]

I agree with Eddy, the atmosphere is perfect on that screen, Shane.

The caption is spot-on as well.

You guys need to start posting bad screens so I can offer some useful critique for a change.