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#6481 Eddy

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Posted 03 September 2015 - 11:25 AM

That's great to hear! I'm loving what you've done to the tileset and that house looks really awesome!


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#6482 FalsePower

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Posted 03 September 2015 - 01:25 PM

Work has begun on my first dungeon. I don't want to spoil too much, but I want to make sure I'm using the tiles correctly. :P

 

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"Link roams the halls of the forgotten citadel under the village. What treasures did the people who built this abandoned wonder hide?"


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#6483 Eddy

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Posted 03 September 2015 - 01:27 PM

Looks like you're using them correctly to me, but then again I'm not too familiar with the tileset :P

 

Either way, it looks really nice. I wonder if those bob-ombs work like they do in MC/LA.



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Posted 03 September 2015 - 03:12 PM

Damn that looks nice, FalsePower. Something that looks a tiny bit strange is that the walls (mainly the lower ones) look like they're floating on top of the lava, rather than sorta being 'next' to the lava.


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#6485 Jared

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Posted 04 September 2015 - 11:04 PM

FalsePower- Cool temple! There are some elevation errors, but they're very minor. Something I noticed is that the grate walkway isn't fully reaching the other side. Hopefully it doesn't fall into the lava? :P

 

Other than that, I feel like Link is out of place in the detailed setting. Loving the diagonal walls too. :)

 

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Link welcomes you to his new and improved home! I finally got the place to have a more stylized feel, instead of just generic. I also feel like something is off with the tree overhang, but it will do for now. Let me know what you guys think!


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Posted 04 September 2015 - 11:44 PM

Work has begun on my first dungeon. I don't want to spoil too much, but I want to make sure I'm using the tiles correctly. :P

 

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"Link roams the halls of the forgotten citadel under the village. What treasures did the people who built this abandoned wonder hide?"

That reminds me A LOT of the final dungeon in Link Between Worlds.


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#6487 Eddy

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Posted 05 September 2015 - 05:00 AM

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Link welcomes you to his new and improved home! I finally got the place to have a more stylized feel, instead of just generic. I also feel like something is off with the tree overhang, but it will do for now. Let me know what you guys think!

This is really well put together. I dunno much about what could be wrong with the overhangs but other than that, everything else looks amazingly well done.


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#6488 Jared

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Posted 06 September 2015 - 12:28 AM

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After a short journey through the Waterfall Cave, our new hero finds a treasure chest! Lucky!

 

 

I finally finished the majority of the cave tiles! All that remains are editing water details and torches, mostly. :)


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#6489 Eddy

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Posted 06 September 2015 - 05:58 AM

Oh god, the goodness never stops ;_;

 

How close is this tileset to getting finished by the way?


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#6490 Jared

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Posted 06 September 2015 - 10:15 AM

The overworld stuff is pretty much complete. Houses and caves are pretty much done. So right now it's mostly dungeons and other things, like the subscreen and items!

I'm thinking of releasing a beta after finishing the first dungeon set. I want people to use it and tell me what they want in there, or what is missing. :)
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Posted 06 September 2015 - 10:45 AM

Okay, what design should I go with for my ice dungeon...

Current Design:
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Alternate design 1:
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Alternate design 2:
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Which one do you prefer?


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#6492 Eddy

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Posted 06 September 2015 - 10:58 AM

You know, I actually prefer the original design, mostly because the walls matched with the rest of the dungeon and it just looks better. In the two alternate designs, the walls just don't match up with the rest, which looks odd. Maybe if you tried to change the colour of the walls in the alternate shots it would look better.



#6493 Jared

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Posted 06 September 2015 - 10:58 AM

I like the first and third ones mostly. I think some of the tiles are colored wrong though. It burns my eyes.



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Posted 06 September 2015 - 12:10 PM

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"As Link waited for the race to start, he decided to explore the forests."
Or.. in real life:
"As I waited for the race to start, I decided to make something."

What do you think?


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#6495 FalsePower

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Posted 06 September 2015 - 12:18 PM

Dimentio, I say go with thw first image. Maybe make the green on the floor pattern an icy-blue instead.

Joel, that screen looks great. You have it perfectly balanced colorwise and everything flows together nicely. Don't change a thing.
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