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#6376 Demonlink

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Posted 07 July 2015 - 04:00 PM

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Such a peaceful time of day to go out and enjoy the sunshine..


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Posted 07 July 2015 - 07:07 PM

yep.
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#6378 Eddy

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Posted 08 July 2015 - 04:30 AM

Oh ma gawd, that's an amazing screen. Amazing colours, amazing detail, amazing everything. Great job :D


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#6379 Avaro

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Posted 08 July 2015 - 07:41 AM

Wow Demonlink, that screen is just perfect! :D

Is it a screen from Hylian Legacy?


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Posted 08 July 2015 - 07:54 AM

yep.

Exactly ;)

Oh ma gawd, that's an amazing screen. Amazing colours, amazing detail, amazing everything. Great job :D

Thanksman! :)

Wow Demonlink, that screen is just perfect! :D
Is it a screen from Hylian Legacy?

Thanks Avataro! Not exactly, it's a random Pure Remembrance screen :) (But it uses one of Hylian Legacy's palettes :lol: )
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#6381 Jared

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Posted 08 July 2015 - 02:01 PM

I don't really like it honestly. It feels so cluttered and there's way too much detail. Like, it feels like there's too much to look at and it's confusing. Does that makes sense?


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Posted 08 July 2015 - 03:35 PM

I don't really like it honestly. It feels so cluttered and there's way too much detail. Like, it feels like there's too much to look at and it's confusing. Does that makes sense?

Yeah, it makes sense. And no problem, I still like it the way it is :D


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Posted 09 July 2015 - 07:56 AM

Looks pretty, design and palette. My only suggestion is to make the left path more like the right path, it will add a little consistency.


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Posted 09 July 2015 - 08:27 AM

What's up with the mountain bottom tiles (where they hit the water)? Why are they horizontal when the top is diagonal?
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Posted 09 July 2015 - 10:27 AM

Looks pretty, design and palette. My only suggestion is to make the left path more like the right path, it will add a little consistency.

Actually, the right path would lead to the wilderness, while the left demonstrates it's a man made path. :)

 

What's up with the mountain bottom tiles (where they hit the water)? Why are they horizontal when the top is diagonal?

Cause, Pure Remembrance yo :P I didn't manage to find diagonal tiles, so you could say that's a poorly used substitute :lol:



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Posted 17 July 2015 - 08:47 PM

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"You must forgive me my dear... But, imagine what fate my life will have if I don't offer you to Brynos, the Fire Lord. I do expect this shall make him forgive me for murdering his mortal brother. What choice did I have!? It was either him or that green capped friend of yours... *sigh* I do hope the Goddesses have mercy on my soul..." - Exynos the Betrayer.

 

Random screen made from random boredom with a random story. Yup... 


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Posted 17 July 2015 - 09:31 PM

You are now obligated to make an epic quest around this story, featuring 12 overworlds and 72 dungeons and Z3 scrolling.

 

That's what happens when you make random screens with stories.

 

You get obligations.


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Posted 19 July 2015 - 12:42 PM

Some screens from Level 3. Tell me what you think!!!!

 

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#6389 SpikeReynolds

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Posted 23 July 2015 - 02:24 AM

Demonlink: Those two shots rock. I really love the color choices, especially on the first shot. That one really pops.

 

cavthena: That looks like an ultimately playable dungeon. Not too keen on those path puzzles, but that's not really a critique of the shots themselves. This looks like something I'd more have to judge as a whole rather than a few select shots.


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#6390 Nightmeres

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Posted 25 July 2015 - 06:03 PM

demonlink: quiet an impressive screen you have there(the one with the lava) intrigues me with the characters there and the other shot i like your use of shadows

Cavthena: I like those puzzles you have going on there.

 

i made this pallet yesterday for my forest. How does it look?

 

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