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#6241 Jared

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Posted 20 April 2015 - 10:35 PM

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"I don't know how to use this tileset"

 

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#6242 Eddy

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Posted 21 April 2015 - 10:28 AM

Oh man, that's really awesome :D

 

My only suggestion would probably be to replace those brown coconuts on the sides of the screens with something else. They would mostly suit a beach or an island, not really a mountainous area. Either way though, really nice stuff.


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Posted 21 April 2015 - 11:43 AM

Thank you! I'm oddly in love with the screen.

But I like my coconuts. :(

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#6244 Avaro

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Posted 21 April 2015 - 02:09 PM

Your screen is very nice Jared, I like how you used the different ground types and it's just generally a good screen.
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Posted 21 April 2015 - 04:12 PM

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I'm having fun with this tileset.  :)

 

(FYI, the last line of tiles was cut off. So the edges are closed!)


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#6246 Shane

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Posted 21 April 2015 - 09:55 PM

Looks good Jared! I would raise the left waterfall up by one tile. Also why are there stairs going up? :P


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Posted 22 April 2015 - 06:21 AM

Looks great, Jared! :) I would follow Shane's suggestions, however.
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#6248 Jared

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 09:42 AM

Stairs going up? Aren't those going down? D:



#6249 Shane

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 09:55 AM

They were used in a certain cave section:

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I don't know why the tileset included them in the overworld section...

 

 

Testing a palette... Gee, it sure looks familiar. >.> <.<

 

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 10:12 AM

Those trees, where they not in these Oracle of Hours April's Fool maps? Or are they from the Oracle betas? It looks really nice, anyways.

I have also been using the GBC tileset lately. It's so lovely.


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Posted 22 April 2015 - 10:16 AM

Actually I based them off of another spriter's work who was making an Oracle of Secrets project I believe. Though they hold a lot of differences. I probably have his name in my notepad somewhere but rest assured, it wasn't from that project.

 

But yeah GBC is a really nice tileset. I can't use any other tileset besides Firebird anymore, I'm so hooked.


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Posted 22 April 2015 - 10:34 AM

Here's a little preview of what I have been working on. Keep in mind that this is not from tFK DX eventhough the subscreen suggests otherwise. It's just that I used the same questfile because I have most of my modifications on the tileset already in place there.

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#6253 Shane

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 10:43 AM

Whoa, that looks really good, design and palette. Though I think I spot a slight issue with the rail next to the shell.



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Posted 22 April 2015 - 11:51 AM

Some great screens going on here!

 

@Jared Another really neat screen! I also spy another coconut, y u do dis Jk lol But yeah, I agree with Shane and DaviAwesome, the stairs tile could be changed to look like it's going down (though Shane already covered this).

 

@Shane That's a really neat palette you got there! I also have never seen that screen before :>

 

@Sheik Oh man, that's a really awesome screen. What else can I say? lol


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#6255 Sheik

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 01:25 PM

Whoa, that looks really good, design and palette. Though I think I spot a slight issue with the rail next to the shell.

You know, that's like 8 pixels. It's amazing to consider that you spotted this. :D But you are right and I fixed it.


Edited by Sheik, 22 April 2015 - 03:05 PM.

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