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#6196 Joelmacool

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Posted 09 April 2015 - 01:56 PM

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More screens! You like it?


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Posted 09 April 2015 - 02:00 PM

Looks really neat and reminds me a lot of the Mysterious Woods. My only suggestion is to add some leaves on the ground like in the original.



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Posted 09 April 2015 - 02:16 PM

 You like it?

I like it.



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Posted 09 April 2015 - 02:31 PM

I like the layout of the screen, Joel. However it feels too plain and empty. The leaves on the ground would help a lot, like Eddy said.
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Posted 09 April 2015 - 10:52 PM

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What could be down there?

 

(Edit- I fixed the grass thing I forgot for the bottom of the mountain on the right. >_>)


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#6201 MoscowModder

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Posted 09 April 2015 - 11:53 PM

I think the trees on the left side are a tad too dense, but otherwise that's an excellent screen.


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Posted 10 April 2015 - 12:53 AM

looks functional.


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#6203 Eddy

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Posted 10 April 2015 - 05:10 AM

Damn! That looks so cool! I'd love to play through that.


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Posted 10 April 2015 - 06:56 AM

I think the trees on the left side are a tad too dense, but otherwise that's an excellent screen.

It looks like that side of the screen won't be accessed, so that really isn't a problem. It's just for aesthetic.

 

I think the screen is fantastic, by the way.


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Posted 10 April 2015 - 09:14 AM

Thanks for the input, everyone. Progress is going smoothly. :)


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Posted 10 April 2015 - 12:42 PM

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Made this today morning, I'd say its a bit boring but eh.


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Posted 10 April 2015 - 12:44 PM

That looks pretty neat! The only thing I noticed is on the right side. There is no border between the stone path and the dirt ground, a simple border would make that look a lot better.

 

Edit: I also found this mountain error:

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Posted 10 April 2015 - 12:56 PM

You call that screen boring? If that screen is boring, then I'd love to see your idea of fun!

I love it. The one thing I'd recommend is closing off that corner. I'm also loving the plain, darker dirt. :)

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Posted 10 April 2015 - 01:23 PM

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Made this today morning, I'd say its a bit boring but eh.

I was never a fan of the GBC overworld palettes. Way too bright and painful on the eyes. You should try making the yellows and greens less "highlighter-y"



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Posted 10 April 2015 - 01:48 PM

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Am I filling this thread with my pictures lol?
I think I'm getting pretty good with this tileset, I'm not that good with using some of the palettes properly but eh, I will get used to it :D


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