Someone else does DayDay also.
At least you could tell DayDay had a shred of effort to be playable. 
All this is is just scribbles, and you didn't even fill in all the space.
The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
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Posted 27 October 2014 - 06:51 PM
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 12:08 PM
Looks wonderful Shane! Could use some enemies or wildelife though!
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 12:09 PM
Looks wonderful Shane! Could use some enemies or wildelife though!
Indeed.
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 12:24 PM
A vast open land with a vast sky stripped of stars... coming soon December 2014.
Too much purple -0/5
Seriously, that looks really cool
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 12:36 PM
Subscreen WIP
Introducing haters! Haters gonna hate!
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 04:02 PM
A vast open land with a vast sky stripped of stars... coming soon December 2014.
Where's the red in this shot!? And seriously!? Flowers!? No no no no no, this deserves a huge -5.97886/0! But I guess I let this pass since that signpost looks sexy, so it's a 5/5 for me! 
New Palette for Twila Forest
After some claimed that the original Forest Palette for this area was a bit awkward, I did a bit of a revamp, inspiration came to me and BAM! This baby came out of my head! She's hot right? RIGHT!? 
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 04:13 PM
Looks wonderful Deamonlink. 
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 09:20 PM
Amazing! Looks pretty awesome Franky! I think you and DoRH are going to get along just fine! I got to say, that shot looks peaceful!Well, you guys were doing it, so I went ahead and tried that hybird set out!
Whatcha' guys think?
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 09:27 PM
I was in a peaceful mood when I made it, thinking about having my own peaceful place in a world with only me. When I did that I let my emotions take over to produce the results. Kinda wish you had a smoke stack for that wooden house though! 
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Posted 29 October 2014 - 09:41 PM
I made a screen.
Spoiler
(spoiler-ed for largeness.. I think)
I like this but like.. it seems bland. I tried adding bushes but I couldn't get them to look right, and I can't really fit anymore trees..
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Posted 30 October 2014 - 05:18 AM
@Demonlink That is one sexy screen. Shoelace has a new competitor
@Franky Looks really nice and looks like something I'd really love to play in!
@Coolgamer I agree, the screen looks a bit empty. I would probably suggest to include some tall grass here and there and probably a few flower tiles you can slash?
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Posted 30 October 2014 - 11:08 AM
You're getting better Coolgamer, keep at it! But yes, more ground detail! And some water. 
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Posted 30 October 2014 - 11:11 AM
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