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[Sheik]

Because Robin is really sexy!

Yes! Finally people start to notice it! Robin we want you!!!

As for the screen, it's pretty sexy itself, too. Nicely done, I like the colours.

[Nightmeres]

MY MAP

This is part of the mechanical caverns area I'm creating

just try to get through here with out being caught by the guards

Any way should I change.

Its LI graphics

Also Nice picture Ironfist

[Marco]

It is an older shot, a bit below par. An enhancement is currently in progress.

[Rover]

well, i think that screen is quite empty, i mean, there is really nothing in it besides the stair and lock-blocks.

Also, if you allow me to say, there is an open corner... please dont kill me..

WHAT NO SHUT UP IT"S SUPPOSED TO LEAD INTO THE OTHER ROOM

And I know this, I'll try to make a better shot whenever I have time, just I have too much going on my PC right now (downloading a game from Steam). Thanks for the advice, none the less.

[Jared]

How do you guys feel about this?

[Marco]

I feel about that....like....people should take at least one second and comment on screens without any review. Critique Thread, not look'n leave.

Anyway, I'd say that is a 6.5/10 shot. The water and cabin compliment each other on the dark contrast, but the cabin is heavy on the outline.

Edited by Furion, 26 June 2011 - 09:22 PM.

[SpacemanDan]

Looks good. The waterfall seems off, like it shouldn't be pouring out like it does.. Also, I notice a lot of the stuff on the left leaves the player only 1 tile of walking space. I would have assumed that it wasn't accessible if it weren't for Link being there. I'd suggest opening the are up slightly.

Other than this, however, I think it looks pretty durn good. :3

[Shane]

How do you guys feel about this?

Looks splendid :3. Like SpacemanDan said, on the subject about the left side. 9/10 from me.

[Jared]

Thanks, you guys
I made it so enemies can't get on the left, so they're no worry.

Edit - New screens. Critique?




I got ransacked in the second picture xD
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Edit again - Changed them up quite a bit! Now everything is getting poisoned.

Edited by Lynker, 27 June 2011 - 09:20 PM.

[Sheik]

The rain-tiles where that create white splashes are ment to be used on water tiles only.
Other than that, the palette is quite interesting, as is the unusal choice of tiles. It has some character, which I like.
I'll honestly admit that I don't like what you did with the many different ground types, though. The sand kind of fits in an interesting fashion, but the detailed grass and the dirt seem to be a little too much. The detailed grass might be okay if used sparingly, but the dirt sort of doesn't work at all IMO.

[Tree]

Lynker, those screens are absolutely delicious! Just simply beautiful and nearly flawless!
But the purple trees, I could go without them. Also, I like the many ground transitions. They make the shots look much more detailed.
But don't get carried away with them okay?

Over all, I think you are getting to good my boy

[Jared]

The rain-tiles where that create white splashes are ment to be used on water tiles only.
Other than that, the palette is quite interesting, as is the unusal choice of tiles. It has some character, which I like.
I'll honestly admit that I don't like what you did with the many different ground types, though. The sand kind of fits in an interesting fashion, but the detailed grass and the dirt seem to be a little too much. The detailed grass might be okay if used sparingly, but the dirt sort of doesn't work at all IMO.

Ohh, water only. Gotcha!
Well, i need the dirt because they're the only tile that works with the (poison) water edges. And detailed grass? That's tall grass, which I think fits nicely in a swampy area.
Thanks too!

Lynker, those screens are absolutely delicious! Just simply beautiful and nearly flawless!
But the purple trees, I could go without them. Also, I like the many ground transitions. They make the shots look much more detailed.
But don't get carried away with them okay?

Over all, I think you are getting to good my boy

Aww, thanks
They're purple for a reason. You'll see And I won't get carried away xD
Thanks so much!

Edited by Lynker, 28 June 2011 - 01:11 PM.

[Shane]

I disagree with Keichii here about the purple trees they maintain a perfect balance to the screen and look poisoned witch would make sense seeing they next to a purple mud/water swamp. Again you did another jaw-dropping awesome job.

[Jared]

Thank you Shane
I was very inspired by the Southern Swamp from Majora's Mask.
And the epicness doesn't end here!

[Marco]

This is probably the only preview I will give until a final product, and it will remain grey-scale.