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[Shane]

South Adaryan

(bgm: twilight princess lake hylia theme)

[Eddy]

South Adaryan

(bgm: twilight princess lake hylia theme)

this screen luk vry gud. love with passin. noice stoof. i forget to like, favourite and subscribe.

 

pece

Edited by EddyTheOliveira, 17 August 2014 - 12:27 PM.

[Demonlink]

South Adaryan

(bgm: twilight princess lake hylia theme)

Top quality all right, but the red crabs bug me and I hate yellow sand, I prefer blue, and since that cave is not open, I give this screen a -10/5  :tard:

I luv scrin, screw my bad review, I giv dis a 100/5, I follow you to infinity and beyond. 

[Eddy]

Top quality all right, but the red crabs bug me and I hate yellow sand, I prefer blue, and since that cave is not open, I give this screen a -10/5  :tard:

I luv scrin, screw my bad review, I giv dis a 100/5, I follow you to infinity and beyond. 

I forget to follow you to infinity and beyond*

 

Sorry, I had to XD

[Demonlink]

I forget to follow you to infinity and beyond*

 

Sorry, I had to XD

No problem Buzz, make me go lol

Edited by Demonlink, 17 August 2014 - 05:06 PM.

[MoscowModder]

I'm figuring out how caves work. Even when not made in cave tiles.

 

 

whai er whee talkin in bad gremmer in currier neu font? 0/999

 

Edit: Added a second screenshot

Edited by MoscowModder, 18 August 2014 - 07:28 PM.

[EpY]

  

Edited by EpY, 19 August 2014 - 09:59 AM.

[MoscowModder]

The ladder's solid-color background clashes with the sand texture, there's no variation in the sand tiles, and the two mountains are too square. Once you fix that, that could be a pretty nice-looking screen.

[Aevin]

I'm figuring out how caves work. Even when not made in cave tiles.

 

I really like the overall impression here, and it's really obvious it's supposed to be in a cave in spite of using outdoor tiles. Great atmosphere!

 

Personally, I think you're overdoing it on the highlights. The only one that really looks right to me is the one around the campfire. I can see it's meant to look like there's holes in the top of the cave letting light in, but it looks too bright, like daylight. I get the feeling of a nighttime scene, but the highlights are too bright to reflect that. Maybe if you made them a little dimmer, and a little smaller?

 

Edit: Weird ... I quoted this just as you added the second image. I feel the same about the second shot. I think the highlights on the second one are more effective, but I still think they need to be dimmer. Even if it's supposed to be daylight outside, it's hard to believe the contrast between light and dark would be so stark.

 

Edit edit: Wait ... I just remembered that my monitor displays colors differently than most, so I probably shouldn't be critiquing based on stuff like that. What does everyone else think of the contrast?

[Demonlink]

I'm figuring out how caves work. Even when not made in cave tiles.

 

*Steals idea*

Hmmmm, I second with Aevin. The holes are too light for this kind of atmosphere. I could try to help you by making an attempt at a cave palette, wait, have you tried doing this using a cave palette? You can get an idea by the tones and dark colors a normal cave palette uses. Pretty much that would be it, and I'm glad you followed Strato's tips, I might do it as well but in a different kind of way (hopefully)

 

whai er whee talkin in bad gremmer in currier neu font? 0/999

dud, Adaryan is popular, dark link like adaryan talk by it's all shane's fault industries, make dark link go boom boom and lol

Edited by Demonlink, 18 August 2014 - 08:14 PM.

[Sheik]

Thumbs up to all those people posting FireBird screens, it's fun to see how people use it!

Edited by Sheik, 19 August 2014 - 02:58 AM.

[Eddy]

I'm figuring out how caves work. Even when not made in cave tiles.

 

 

whai er whee talkin in bad gremmer in currier neu font? 0/999

 

Edit: Added a second screenshot

I third(?) with Aevin and Demonlink, so I shouln't really repeat what's been said, though the screens look really nice!

 

also MoscowModder, have u not herd about PeacockLovers arrival and Adaryan? theyre all rage these days, u must forget to like, comment and follow. pece

[Shane]

Dryflood Sands

(bgm: twilight princess gerudo desert theme)

Edited by Shane, 19 August 2014 - 09:19 PM.

[Demonlink]

Dryflood Sands

(bgm: twilight princess gerudo desert theme)

... dat's hot

[Shane]

im anti-sad you don't disagree