Nice screens SirKazuma. But first off, this isn't DoR, but rather Pure Remembrance. No worries, a lot of people get confused. ![]()
Anyway as I said, these are nice for your first. As a rule of thumb, you should generally keep mountains at a short height to allow more flexibility and more space for other objects. The tree "inside" the mountain on the bottom screen, sitting on the top center edge should be removed, since it will cause Link to get stuck if he walks into it from the above screen. Also visually, it does not look good. The grass and dirt borders need to be less straight; make them more free form and give them a more natural flow.
All in all, impressive start.




