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#526 Moo2wo

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 03:04 PM

Looks great! My only complaints are the mountains on the left are a little square, and I wouldn't use the broken wood tiles in a field-ish screen.

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 03:10 PM

Does this look better?
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#528 Moo2wo

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 03:12 PM

Yeah, that's perfect. I wouldn't change it one bit. icon_smile.gif

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 03:22 PM

QUOTE(Moo2wo @ Jun 13 2011, 03:13 PM) View Post

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I also played with the shape of the house a little.
Screen looks perfect!, but the lady style clashes a bit.

Edited by Yoshidude, 13 June 2011 - 03:23 PM.


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Posted 13 June 2011 - 03:29 PM

If you gave her face a makeover and redid the shading and those eyes the girl might work for what it's worth.

#531 Moo2wo

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 03:45 PM

I redid her face. What do you think? The left version has the highlight in the hair, and the right version doesn't.

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 04:08 PM

Highlight in the hair seems fine, redid face looks better. I'd say it works even it's no perfect fit for the tileset. Better than the GB NPCs for sure.

#533 Moon

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:07 PM

Little part of my map
http://zcrealm.net/screen.php?num=229

#534 Moo2wo

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:10 PM

That looks excellent. I'd remove the the blue mushrooms, or change them to red, and I'd stick to one type of water border; LttP or BS. Other than those two minor issues, it's great!

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:13 PM

Nothing particularly bad or good about it. It makes for a solid map for any game, but nothing too special. The one thing I would change is the land(?) bordering the water. It looks pretty strange. I'd just have the mountain border the water, and get rid of that grassy border.

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:15 PM

This better?
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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:16 PM

I'd still remove that grass border.

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:18 PM

Then It would look empty icon_wink.gif

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:19 PM

Looks great yoshidude, the only thing i would do is vary the flower colors.

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Posted 13 June 2011 - 08:19 PM

Then you should at least replace it with a brown/dirt border. The grass looks strange.


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