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[Silver]

LOL at first one.
What's the competition for? What's the prize?

[Adem]

Here's some of my stuff. Don't steal them.

ToA - Luke and Tear's son
ToS Fan art with other character skit faces put in
Character for my Tales of the Abyss doujinshi
Random guy with an eye patch
Link's character design for my quest
Princess Heart, from my quest
Main Character for my Tales of the Abyss doujinshi
One of my pages. Just picked a random one.
Luke fan art w/ custom costume

Have fun. Comments?

[Sheik]

Here's some of my stuff. Don't steal them.
Have fun. Comments?

It's pretty good by I recommend you to work with references, anatomy and expression turn out way better then. Moreover I guess you should draw them until there 'finished', they look pretty but they look like sketches to me.


Now something else... This is my Link design (at present), a crossing of TP and Oracle Link... well, here you go: http://www.imagehut....140DSC03826.JPG
crayon and a thin edding

The cam was hungry and ate all the colour :-(

[Lemon]

It looks like you (Link R us) memorized a page in one of those "how to draw Manga" books and didn't bother with the rest. Front faces look fine, every other angle looks very weird and kooky. I'd highly recommend trying to learn how to draw people in your style in various positions (there are plenty of sites for base images). Keep it up, you have a long journey ahead of you!

[Taco Chopper]

A small collage I have been working on.

[Sheik]

Keep it up, you have a long journey ahead of you!

You have indeed. But I guess your talented, you just have to spend more time drawing (if you want to of course, if drawing takes such a big significance in your life like in mine for example).

A small collage I have been working on.

It looks good but thats it after all. I don't see the message but I'm not you so that's just normal.



Aaaand, something older from me. Self-portrait, crayons. The cam ate the colours again.
http://www.imagehut....499DSC03824.JPG


Edit: That topic seems to be dead. No one cares about what the person before him posted. Sad.

Edited by Shiek, 23 April 2009 - 01:29 AM.

[Moonbread]

And we were all swept away...

Made this today in 4th block, I was bored...

[SpacemanDan]

Been drawing stuff with MS Paint. Fun stuff, dood.
Pleinair
Etna
Flonne (Fallen Angel)

[Bowser Blanchette]

Top Man was here.

My newest Wallpaper. What do you think?

[Alestance]

Been practicing, light and such. I think I'm failing at this.

Edited by Alestance, 30 April 2009 - 11:36 AM.

[Sheik]

Prospect: Abstract art, isn't it? Well, sadly I'm not much into into this, I like it more realistic. But the colours work well together, eventhoug they don't make me feel anything.
Blaman: While the hair looks pretty good the form of the faces is still quite strange. Moreover the shading is wrong. But I see potential here.
Bowser Blanchette: I guess it looks like it should. However, I don't like the style of it. But actually good work.
Alestance: Looks like an exploding rainbow . Keep in mind that every source of light shines in every direction. Maybe practice by using just one or two light sources. Also, that crystal shouldn't be black in the middle.

Just my point of view of course; only an attempt to give some constructive critic.

[SpacemanDan]

Blaman: While the hair looks pretty good the form of the faces is still quite strange. Moreover the shading is wrong. But I see potential here.

Thank you for your comments. I used this and this for my refs for 2 of the characters and stuff. As for the form of faces looking strange, I'd like to know specifically what you mean. They looked strange to me, too, but I couldn't pin-point why.

[Sheik]

Thank you for your comments. I used this and this for my refs for 2 of the characters and stuff. As for the form of faces looking strange, I'd like to know specifically what you mean. They looked strange to me, too, but I couldn't pin-point why.

Sure.
It is indeed hard to pinpoint it out. The faces seem to be a little to round , I guess. The cheeks look wrong placed and the chin is way too spiky. I also guess that the mounth isn't positioned right. This is hard to describe, hmm.
Take a look at this poor paint-drawing:

Do you see that line that describes how the mouth must be placed? Well, of course you do. I guess you haven't took regard on that.

That's everything that comes to my mind right know...

Edit: Now I got it. They need to be more lenghty. It looks a little bruised I guess.

Edited by Shiek, 30 April 2009 - 04:35 PM.

[SpacemanDan]

I gotcha. I'll keep that in mind for my future works. Thanks!

[Moonbread]

http://www.facebook....mp;l=ad2f424f63

Public Link. Check it out, yo.

Or: http://speakwithbrea...rt.com/gallery/

Edited by Prospekt, 30 April 2009 - 07:50 PM.