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#4876 anikom15

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Posted 11 January 2014 - 11:25 PM

Master Sword Room

 

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Posted 12 January 2014 - 12:12 AM

I think it looks very nice! This is just a matter of personal preference, but I think it might look better if there were a little more breathing space around the platform. It seems a little strange that there's some room space around it, but the statues block you into walking straight up onto the platform. If it were me, I'd probably move the upper and side walls out one and try to place the statues more in corners so there's a path around the platform where Link could walk. Yeah, I know there's no purpose to actually going there, but I think the extra space would look nicer.

 

Of course, it's fine the way you have it, too, so feel free to disregard my advice if you like it better this way.


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Posted 12 January 2014 - 06:46 AM

I like :D Looks like a very nice Master Sword pedestal/room/place/thing. And considering this is on the classic set, gives it a very classical charm to it.



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Posted 12 January 2014 - 09:30 PM

Here is some screens I've put together today, they are not much pretty much they are some generic over world screenshots.

 

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The bottom left is a redone screen of one I posted yesterday.


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Posted 12 January 2014 - 10:00 PM

I like how you added outlines to the classic set. It makes it look Master System/PC Engine-ish.



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Posted 12 January 2014 - 10:38 PM

I like how you added outlines to the classic set. It makes it look Master System/PC Engine-ish.

I didn't do it, all the credit goes to FnrrfYgmSchnish and the tile-set that he made :P


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Posted 12 January 2014 - 11:24 PM

Well, it was a nice directional decision on your part. :)



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Posted 13 January 2014 - 12:04 AM

Interesting enough screens, get the job done.



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Posted 13 January 2014 - 12:10 AM

Well, it was a nice directional decision on your part. :)

Thanks ;)

 

Interesting enough screens, get the job done.

I'll try just hope that my questy mood will stay for awhile :P


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#4885 Xenix

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Posted 14 January 2014 - 05:14 PM

Just a little secret project I've been working on. Screen is WIP (work in progress), but feel free to rip it apart anyway. ;)
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#4886 Shane

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Posted 14 January 2014 - 05:17 PM

I like it but the /\ mountain formation is one off my many pet peeves. It dosen't seem right.


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#4887 Xenix

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Posted 14 January 2014 - 07:20 PM

How about this?
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#4888 Shane

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Posted 14 January 2014 - 07:25 PM

Much better. :)
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Posted 14 January 2014 - 08:43 PM

This is the screen to the immediate right of the previous one. The small waterfall and river looks okay to me, but I was arguing with myself numerous times over how to make it work.

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Posted 14 January 2014 - 09:31 PM

Transparent water looks good for shallow water, but for rivers you may want to reconsider, or maybe give it more tone.
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