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The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
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, Apr 16 2011 09:35 PM
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Posted 30 November 2013 - 08:04 PM
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Posted 30 November 2013 - 09:19 PM
better. slate is still a weird color.
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Posted 30 November 2013 - 10:30 PM
better. slate is still a weird color.
No argument there. I never notice those stupid little things until I post it.
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Posted 01 December 2013 - 08:13 AM
Intro from my two week contest quest that ended up like a failure (surprised?).
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Posted 01 December 2013 - 11:05 AM
That screen is gonna be like the stuff in NFB! It looks great, But I cant really see the temple very well (Unless there is none...)...
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Posted 01 December 2013 - 04:26 PM
Thanks. You can see the temple at the top center resting in the middle of the mountains. 
Edited by Shane, 01 December 2013 - 04:26 PM.
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Posted 01 December 2013 - 07:57 PM
great image, awkward text.
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Posted 02 December 2013 - 12:54 AM
*an ancient temple. I noticed you make that mistake a lot. Do you happen to say "ay", instead of "uh" when you say the letter A? That might explain why.
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Posted 02 December 2013 - 01:06 AM
It's just that at the time of the contest, I didn't learn how "a" and "an" worked. But most of the time, I rush posts lol.
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Posted 02 December 2013 - 08:14 AM
that error is an issue and the first few words are awkward.
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Posted 02 December 2013 - 06:12 PM
WIP title screen shits.
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Posted 06 December 2013 - 01:58 AM
Any suggestions for improving this block puzzle or do you guys think it's okay?
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Basically the main floor tiles are all No Push Block flagged and the "playing area" for the blocks are the two 3x3 and one 2x5 section in the middle of the room with the slanted rectangular tiles being the ones the blocks can be pushed onto. The arrow blocks are self explanatory, the blank ones can be pushed in all four directions and the flatted blocks are the trigger points. Once all three triggers are active, the blocks around the stairs go away.
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Posted 06 December 2013 - 02:20 AM
Any suggestions for improving this block puzzle or do you guys think it's okay?
The middle and right puzzles look fine to me, but the left one seems too easy. The bottom block (the one that can be pushed right) doesn't appear to serve a purpose.
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Posted 06 December 2013 - 02:24 AM
The middle and right puzzles look fine to me, but the left one seems too easy. The bottom block (the one that can be pushed right) doesn't appear to serve a purpose.
How could I change the left side to be more difficult?
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