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#4381 Supindahood

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Posted 06 April 2013 - 09:33 AM

I sprited the great bridge from and for tHP, and made some quick screens to test it out.

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And here is a screenshot of the old bridge.
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#4382 Sheik

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Posted 06 April 2013 - 10:19 AM

Looking seriously sexy, Jonathan! Love it!

#4383 DragonDePlatino

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Posted 06 April 2013 - 11:05 AM

QUOTE(Supindahood @ Apr 6 2013, 09:33 AM) View Post

I sprited the great bridge from and for tHP, and made some quick screens to test it out.]

Wooow that is an amazing palette you have there. So much detail into the bridge, too! Lots of little shading and highlights for each of the bricks! And it all patterns really nicely without looking too boring on the middle section.

Your spriting skills make me SUPER jelly. icon_naughty.gif

#4384 Supindahood

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Posted 06 April 2013 - 12:06 PM

Thanks! I updated it slightly, but nothing worth showing. I will now continue to work on more stuff for the tileset.

#4385 Octorockoncrack

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Posted 14 April 2013 - 09:48 PM

Quartet Isle, a small island on the Mako Shoreline

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#4386 Shane

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 03:19 AM

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#4387 Sheik

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 04:22 AM

I dunno. Certainly not your best work. :/ I can't really put my finger on why I dislike it either, though. Maybe try snowy tree tops and add a tree in that left bottom cornor. The palette seems to need fixing, too.

#4388 Shane

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 04:39 AM

That's okay, it's been awhile since I made a actual functional screen. So I need to get all that unwanted rust off.

I'm also improving my palette skills so yeah. I might have a crack at making my own winter palette. Thanks. icon_smile.gif

#4389 Supindahood

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 05:03 AM

Fix palette first, I'm also not sure about using grass borders ontop of grass.

#4390 Shane

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 05:04 AM

It's meant to be snow, but I see what you mean. icon_razz.gif
I'll see what I can do. icon_smile.gif

#4391 -DuCkTApE-

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 04:27 PM

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After my 2nd failed attempt at using this
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Tell me what you think!

#4392 Moon

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 04:44 PM

QUOTE(-DuCkTApE- @ Apr 16 2013, 05:27 PM) View Post

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After my 2nd failed attempt at using this
program, i'm back on, and hopefully for good this time. icon_smile.gif

Tell me what you think!
It's nice and simplistic, but that's about all the good things I can say about it. It doesn't really offer anything beyond that; which doesn't mean it's a bad screen, just that it could be better. For one thing, the screen is pretty heavy on the greens, and it's brightness kinda makes it a bit hard to look at.

For the green issue, perhaps you could add a couple mountains, or maybe a puddle of water or something. Anything really, would help as long as it's not more green.

Good luck, by the way. icon_smile.gif


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Posted 16 April 2013 - 04:57 PM

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#4394 -DuCkTApE-

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 05:02 PM

QUOTE(Tingle @ Apr 16 2013, 04:44 PM) View Post

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It's nice and simplistic, but that's about all the good things I can say about it. It doesn't really offer anything beyond that; which doesn't mean it's a bad screen, just that it could be better. For one thing, the screen is pretty heavy on the greens, and it's brightness kinda makes it a bit hard to look at.

For the green issue, perhaps you could add a couple mountains, or maybe a puddle of water or something. Anything really, would help as long as it's not more green.

Good luck, by the way. icon_smile.gif


Its suppose to be really green. Its like a lush green forest and its one of the first few screens of this level and it spreads out into a lake/mountain/waterfall thingy. icon_smile.gif

QUOTE(Sheik @ Apr 16 2013, 04:57 PM) View Post

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That screen looks good. I really like your sub-screen!

#4395 Moonbread

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Posted 17 April 2013 - 05:50 PM

QUOTE(Sheik @ Apr 16 2013, 05:57 PM) View Post

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Ahhhhhh I want to team up with you even though I'm only good at overworld design ;~; and maybe making palettes, but I can't be trusted


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