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#4036 Shane

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 08:27 PM

Yes, and with the addition of a warm palette, this should be great. icon_biggrin.gif

#4037 Xenix

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 08:40 PM

I hear you. I think I'll use Pure Remembrance and add a ton of stuff to it. I am already setting the scripts back up again and I am redoing the whole island.

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 10:05 PM

Okay, how does this look?
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I know the underbrush looks bare, but I'll detail that in a bit.

Edited by Sepulcher, 04 January 2013 - 10:06 PM.


#4039 Shane

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 10:07 PM

MUCH more sexier, I'll give you that. icon_biggrin.gif

I spy an error on the top left corner of the left most palm tree. icon_razz.gif

Edited by Shane, 04 January 2013 - 10:08 PM.


#4040 Xenix

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 10:09 PM

QUOTE(Shane @ Jan 4 2013, 10:07 PM) View Post

MUCH more sexier, I'll give you that. icon_biggrin.gif

I spy an error on the top left corner of the left most palm tree. icon_razz.gif

Thanks! Oops, looks like I pulled a Dawnlight. icon_doh.gif I'll fix that.

Edit: Fixed.

Edited by Sepulcher, 04 January 2013 - 10:12 PM.


#4041 Shane

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 10:19 PM

One more suggestion, is to make the shoreline less straight. Everything else is perfect.

Edited by Shane, 04 January 2013 - 10:20 PM.


#4042 Xenix

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 10:22 PM

Okay, sure thing. I can do that. icon_smile.gif I'll post a new screenshot in a bit of the screen just south of this one.

Edit: Here's the other screen I mentioned as well as the fixed version of the first screen.
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Edited by Sepulcher, 04 January 2013 - 11:02 PM.


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Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:04 PM

Now you've got it! This looks much better. Nice work!

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:09 PM

Thanks Russ! I was originally looking for ways to keep the original structure and give it a new coat of paint, but yeah, I guess I do focus too much on keeping within limits. Anyways, I was listening to your critique the whole time, like always, and I figured I'd show you that I was listening by giving these screens my all. Thank's Russ, NoeL, Shane, Migokalle, and Dawnlight.

#4045 Shane

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:14 PM

Now this is a remake I'd play! icon_wink.gif

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:23 PM

Awesome is all I have to say.

#4047 Xenix

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:28 PM

QUOTE(Shane @ Jan 4 2013, 11:14 PM) View Post

Now this is a remake I'd play! icon_wink.gif

Thanks! icon_awesome.gif

QUOTE(Dragonite @ Jan 4 2013, 11:23 PM) View Post

Awesome is all I have to say.

Once again, thanks! icon_deformed.gif

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:38 PM

Ah! You're using Pure Remembrance - Golden Memories edition. icon_lol.gif

#4049 Xenix

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:44 PM

On the latest episode of Pimp Mah Quest!
lol Yeah, I'm using the GM set. icon_xd.gif I told you you have a nice set that is better organized than the original PR, that's why I can use it so well. icon_awesome.gif I always had a hard time finding things in the PTUX set. This version of PR is fantastic. Plus all the added palettes make for an awesome set.
I think your set will truly polish this game out. icon_biggrin.gif

Edit: When I read what you typed, I heard a funny announcer voice reading it that made me laugh. icon_lol.gif

Edited by Sepulcher, 04 January 2013 - 11:50 PM.


#4050 NoeL

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 04:54 AM

Looking much better, though the palette still needs a lot of work. It looks like it's overcast rather than a bright sunny day.

Here's what you should be aiming for:
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