The Official Quest Screenshot Critique Thread
#3691
Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:59 PM
http://i.imgur.com/YPYoh.png
Since I've been redoing a lot of areas in my game, I started remaking this area. Those two screens have turned into this:
http://i.imgur.com/Y4Jrp.png
#3692
Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:44 PM
This is an old shot, I made this entrance to Hyrule Castle probably around February.
http://i.imgur.com/YPYoh.png
Since I've been redoing a lot of areas in my game, I started remaking this area. Those two screens have turned into this:
http://i.imgur.com/Y4Jrp.png
The 1st one is great but the 2nd one, the water looks weird
Here are some areas that I think could be worked on a little in my quest
Edited by -DuCkTApE-, 23 November 2012 - 04:52 PM.
#3693
Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:58 PM
The 1st one is great but the 2nd one, the water looks weird
Here are some areas that I think could be worked on a little in my quest

Which is a good thing, and a bad thing.
It shows that you can make good, standard screens, but you need to throw some originality in them, more life.
#3694
Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:59 PM
#3695
Posted 23 November 2012 - 05:16 PM
Im waiting to add scripts, so when I add scripts there will be NPCs and like butterflys and stuff lol
But yeah, those work too.
#3696
Posted 23 November 2012 - 05:21 PM
#3697
Posted 24 November 2012 - 10:04 AM
Entrance to Level 5(Cloud Land Temple):

#3698
Posted 24 November 2012 - 10:13 AM
Now that Supindahood made a winter palette, I can finish the overworld of Perlar's Quest.
Entrance to Level 5(Cloud Land Temple):

That looks great but the background could have some clouds or a ocean if its on a island. And idk if the water is animating, if it is great! but if its not, you can add some waves or something
#3700
Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:33 PM

Touched up a little on these ones
Edited by -DuCkTApE-, 24 November 2012 - 07:44 PM.
#3701
Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:37 PM
The 1st one is great but the 2nd one, the water looks weird
Here are some areas that I think could be worked on a little in my quest

Very nice! I would play a quest with screens like this for sure! I would add some leaves and tall grass in shots 2 and 3, and some bushes is all 3. I would add more roots in the water in shot one. Overall, they look nice and clean! No odd tile placements or tiling errors that I can see.
#3702
Posted 26 November 2012 - 07:58 AM
#3703
Posted 26 November 2012 - 01:04 PM
#3704
Posted 27 November 2012 - 11:15 AM
#3705
Posted 28 November 2012 - 11:12 PM



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