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#3691 Octorockoncrack

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:59 PM

This is an old shot, I made this entrance to Hyrule Castle probably around February.
http://i.imgur.com/YPYoh.png

Since I've been redoing a lot of areas in my game, I started remaking this area. Those two screens have turned into this:
http://i.imgur.com/Y4Jrp.png

#3692 -DuCkTApE-

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:44 PM

QUOTE(Octorockoncrack @ Nov 23 2012, 02:59 PM) View Post

This is an old shot, I made this entrance to Hyrule Castle probably around February.
http://i.imgur.com/YPYoh.png

Since I've been redoing a lot of areas in my game, I started remaking this area. Those two screens have turned into this:
http://i.imgur.com/Y4Jrp.png


The 1st one is great but the 2nd one, the water looks weird


Here are some areas that I think could be worked on a little in my quest
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Edited by -DuCkTApE-, 23 November 2012 - 04:52 PM.


#3693 Moon

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:58 PM

QUOTE(-DuCkTApE- @ Nov 23 2012, 04:44 PM) View Post

The 1st one is great but the 2nd one, the water looks weird
Here are some areas that I think could be worked on a little in my quest
IPB Image IPB Image IPB Image
Those screenshots look so....official.

Which is a good thing, and a bad thing.

It shows that you can make good, standard screens, but you need to throw some originality in them, more life.


#3694 -DuCkTApE-

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:59 PM

Im waiting to add scripts, so when I add scripts there will be NPCs and like butterflys and stuff lol

#3695 Moon

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 05:16 PM

QUOTE(-DuCkTApE- @ Nov 23 2012, 04:59 PM) View Post

Im waiting to add scripts, so when I add scripts there will be NPCs and like butterflys and stuff lol
That's not exactly what I meant, I mean vegetation, like grass, bushes and other stuff like paths, sign posts and fences.

But yeah, those work too.


#3696 -DuCkTApE-

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 05:21 PM

I hate vegetables! icon_razz.gif Yeah im still working on all of those screens.

#3697 Thomas G. House

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 10:04 AM

Now that Supindahood made a winter palette, I can finish the overworld of Perlar's Quest.

Entrance to Level 5(Cloud Land Temple):
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Posted 24 November 2012 - 10:13 AM

QUOTE(L L L L L LINK @ Nov 24 2012, 09:04 AM) View Post

Now that Supindahood made a winter palette, I can finish the overworld of Perlar's Quest.

Entrance to Level 5(Cloud Land Temple):
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That looks great but the background could have some clouds or a ocean if its on a island. And idk if the water is animating, if it is great! but if its not, you can add some waves or something

#3699 Jared

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:32 PM

QUOTE(L L L L L LINK @ Nov 24 2012, 10:04 AM) View Post

Now that Supindahood made a winter palette, I can finish the overworld of Perlar's Quest.

Entrance to Level 5(Cloud Land Temple):
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I love the idea of the temple! I can't wait to see how it's pulled off. Good luck!

#3700 -DuCkTApE-

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:33 PM

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Touched up a little on these ones
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Edited by -DuCkTApE-, 24 November 2012 - 07:44 PM.


#3701 Frocks7Snee

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:37 PM

QUOTE(-DuCkTApE- @ Nov 23 2012, 04:44 PM) View Post

The 1st one is great but the 2nd one, the water looks weird
Here are some areas that I think could be worked on a little in my quest
IPB Image IPB Image IPB Image

Very nice! I would play a quest with screens like this for sure! I would add some leaves and tall grass in shots 2 and 3, and some bushes is all 3. I would add more roots in the water in shot one. Overall, they look nice and clean! No odd tile placements or tiling errors that I can see. icon_biggrin.gif [c00ln3rd stamp of approval]

#3702 TheLegend_njf

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Posted 26 November 2012 - 07:58 AM

Example image of a screen that will be featured in Level 3 in SoW2.

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#3703 MoscowModder

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Posted 26 November 2012 - 01:04 PM

I don't think I've ever seen a screen quite like that one - quite unique (at least to me) and good looking! The chains reaching straight across the top of the screen look very odd, though.

#3704 TheLegend_njf

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 11:15 AM

The chains are animated and constantly moving, and does serve an actual purpose which is revealed at the end of the level.

#3705 Jay

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Posted 28 November 2012 - 11:12 PM

Few new overworld screens from my old tileset/quest project. The taller trees are new in it credit to BS/MC tileset, as well as all the stone tiles. The top one just to see what people think of the MC pallette in ZC.

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(Sorry for the upper larger one.)




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