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#3586 Moon

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Posted 24 October 2012 - 10:24 PM

Looks pretty good, Jay.

Not much to complain about. icon_smile.gif

#3587 strike

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Posted 25 October 2012 - 08:11 AM

Jay, that's a really good shot! I usually don't especially like GB town shots, but I really like the feel of this one. I especially enjoy the transition to the forest and how the houses lay across the landscape like an actual small village. Good Job! icon_smile.gif

#3588 Jay

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Posted 25 October 2012 - 10:30 PM

Thanks for the compliments ! Thought I'd throw up a shot from the more foresty area.

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#3589 Sheik

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 02:33 AM

I love that small cave to the north. Kinda really makes the screen for me. icon_smile.gif

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 03:51 PM

QUOTE(NewJourneysFire @ Oct 24 2012, 08:17 PM) View Post

Two to one, vote for more natural looking snow is in. Do we have more votes for natural snow?

I actually think the snow color is perfect i sometimes saw a color like that here when i was younger walking home from the forest with my friends. However if i remember right the mountains should be slightly darker(the snow itself is perfect). Since it is a test screen i wont comment on the off perspective, which would not matter in a full game anyways(i dont care about perspective).

#3591 TheLegend_njf

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 08:49 PM

Thanks aaa2. icon_smile.gif

#3592 Octorockoncrack

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Posted 27 October 2012 - 11:48 AM

A dream world, foreshadowing a catastrophe that is yet unseen...

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#3593 Jared

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Posted 27 October 2012 - 11:55 AM

Wonderful work, OctorockonCrack. I love it! Wonder what's it's for...

#3594 Ica

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Posted 27 October 2012 - 12:55 PM

Really nice Octorockoncrack, the screen is well done and the idea is pretty neat.
I don't see why the water should turn into lava though.

#3595 Shane

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Posted 27 October 2012 - 07:18 PM

Well it's a dream world, anything could change really. icon_razz.gif

Looking good Octo. icon_thumbsup.gif

#3596 Moonbread

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Posted 31 October 2012 - 12:13 PM

Working on giving the GB Tileset not-blinding palettes.

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I wouldn't recommend trying to rip the palette here, though, it's a complete mess and I'm currently rearranging it, and even then, it currently won't go all that well into EZGBZ. I'm basically starting from scratch. x:

#3597 Moon

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Posted 31 October 2012 - 12:16 PM

QUOTE(Scootaloo @ Oct 31 2012, 02:13 PM) View Post

Working on giving the GB Tileset not-blinding palettes.

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I wouldn't recommend trying to rip the palette here, though, it's a complete mess and I'm currently rearranging it, and even then, it currently won't go all that well into EZGBZ. I'm basically starting from scratch. x:
The screen itself, is pretty good, although the mountain formation looks a bit odd, but maybe that's just me. icon_razz.gif

As for the palette, I like it!

I know what you mean by blinding palettes, having used EZGBZ for more than a year now.


#3598 Jared

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Posted 03 November 2012 - 12:32 AM

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#3599 Russ

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Posted 03 November 2012 - 12:38 AM

I love what you're doing with the mountains, and the screen layout's good. But the trees... I don't really like how you kinda forced the DoR trees to work like MC trees. It looks unnatural. I'd honestly just stick with the regular trunks.

#3600 Shane

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Posted 03 November 2012 - 12:43 AM

I love the bright colours you chose and how you arranged those mountains. I like those trees actually, but maybe try the other treetop from DoR? (There should be another made by Linkus iirc)


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