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[Jared]

Beautiful work as always, Marco. But a random hammer spot instead of the Roc's Feather? Hmm...

There's also a half-tree near the middle of the map. Thought you should know.
Love your work, pal. Keep it up.

[Moon]

Well, not quite a full map, but here we go. Keep in mind this is still alpha, however I feel the area is making great progress. Feedback is appreciated as always.

LINK to IMAGE

Want.

[Octorockoncrack]

Trying something different...

[Shane]

I like it, good job.

[aaa2]

@Octorockoncrack
Seems a bit ... well empty

[Shane]

@Octorockoncrack
Seems a bit ... well empty

I personally think it's fine, not every tile block needs to have something on it. Why do you think quest development grow slow in some cases? Because people are giving too much attention to each screen-- nothing gets done besides having a cluttered screen.

But of course this is Octo's decision in the end.

Edited by Shane, 14 October 2012 - 05:46 AM.

[Thomas G. House]

It feels good to be working on Perlar's Quest again.

The screen is the entrance to Level 6.

[Marco]

It feels good to be working on Perlar's Quest again.

The screen is the entrance to Level 6.

I like where you are going with this screen. However, I will point out that the screen is very symmetrical and plain. Add some rocks into the open water, maybe some minor vegetation bordering the building.

[Ica]

L L L L L LINK, looks really nice, but you could add some detail to the sand.

[Marco]

Info n what not, ADVANCED ADVANCE

[Moon]

A bit over-detailed to be completely honest, but of course that does not make it a bad screen.

I think the tree top colors could be just a tad bit darker, for the green.

Edited by Dragonite, 15 October 2012 - 07:04 PM.

[nicklegends]

Marco, the construction of the screen is pretty good, but I agree with Dragonite that it seems a little over-detailed in the grassy area. Also, I find the gravel path to be really contrasty--maybe a bit too much so. Overall, pretty good stuff.

[Marco]

I did expect others to say that about the paved paths, or gravel which ever it looks like. It's just a temporary ground, until I draw up something better.

[Tree]

I love the screen Marco. It does have a lot of unnecessary ground details, but nothing that puts me off. I also think the path is a bit boring. But not sure what you could do to make it more interesting

[Shane]

Old screen is old in which I no longer have on my computer, feel free to critic it though.