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#3331 trudatman

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 10:57 PM

I often wonder if folks showing screens with water have considered the functionality of when the player has abilities for swimming and the likes. just an interjection. carry on.

#3332 Giggidy

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 11:53 PM

I don't give out the flippers for exactly this reason.

#3333 Ventus

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 07:41 AM

QUOTE(Scootaloo @ Aug 13 2012, 10:21 PM) View Post

You kind of overdid it on the whole "blank grass tiles" as in, it completely clashes with everything else. When Gonken said to use them, he didn't mean for over half the screen, it's just nice to use very sparingly to avoid overdoing it on detail.

So I over did it eh? Figures I would >_<, Oh well went back and redone the grass again.

QUOTE(Giggidy @ Aug 13 2012, 10:38 PM) View Post

What's wrong with the tree bases?

And >_< I didn't think anyone would notice.. Oh well an easy fix XD.

Here's the remade screen how is it now?
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Edited by Ventus, 14 August 2012 - 07:41 AM.


#3334 Tree

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 05:56 PM

I think it looks very nice, Ventus. Very well balanced in detail and tile placement icon_thumbsup.gif

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#3335 Jared

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 06:21 PM

QUOTE(Ventus @ Aug 14 2012, 08:41 AM) View Post

So I over did it eh? Figures I would >_<, Oh well went back and redone the grass again.
And >_< I didn't think anyone would notice.. Oh well an easy fix XD.

Here's the remade screen how is it now?
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I love it!

QUOTE(Keiichi123 @ Aug 14 2012, 06:56 PM) View Post

I think it looks very nice, Ventus. Very well balanced in detail and tile placement icon_thumbsup.gif

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Simply delicious.

#3336 Tree

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 06:38 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Aug 14 2012, 05:21 PM) View Post

Simply delicious.

Thanks! There are several errors that I will fix, but I think it looks fine icon_smile.gif

#3337 Ventus

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 06:57 PM

QUOTE(Keiichi123 @ Aug 14 2012, 05:56 PM) View Post

I think it looks very nice, Ventus. Very well balanced in detail and tile placement icon_thumbsup.gif

Thanks Keiichi123! , and your screen looks great too icon_smile.gif

QUOTE(Jared @ Aug 14 2012, 06:21 PM) View Post

I love it!

Thanks Jared! icon_biggrin.gif

#3338 Dawnlight

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 07:12 PM

QUOTE(Keiichi123 @ Aug 14 2012, 05:56 PM) View Post

I think it looks very nice, Ventus. Very well balanced in detail and tile placement icon_thumbsup.gif

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Dawnlight-approved, but why the folding on the upper left walls?

Edited by Dawnlight, 14 August 2012 - 07:13 PM.


#3339 Tree

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 07:35 PM

QUOTE(Dawnlight @ Aug 14 2012, 06:12 PM) View Post

Dawnlight-approved, but why the folding on the upper left walls?

Thanks icon_smile.gif I'm not sure what you mean by, "folding"... but please, do tell!

#3340 Orithan

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 02:06 AM

QUOTE(Keiichi123 @ Aug 15 2012, 10:35 AM) View Post

Thanks icon_smile.gif I'm not sure what you mean by, "folding"... but please, do tell!

What Dawnlight means by "folding" is how the walls fold outward just above the left door and then back in at the top. I think that this instance looks out of place in this screen.
Great screen by the way.

#3341 Tree

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 12:42 PM

QUOTE(Orin XD @ Aug 15 2012, 01:06 AM) View Post

What Dawnlight means by "folding" is how the walls fold outward just above the left door and then back in at the top. I think that this instance looks out of place in this screen.
Great screen by the way.

Oh, I get it. I made the right side look like the left side so I don't think there's a problem anymore icon_wink.gif

#3342 Moon

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 04:43 PM

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 05:19 PM

It's nice and simple...not much to comment on though. icon_razz.gif
What's wrong with the mountain on the top left though? Something looks off behind the furthest-most treetops.

#3344 Moon

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Posted 16 August 2012 - 12:10 AM

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#3345 Dawnlight

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Posted 16 August 2012 - 10:27 AM

That pool of water must be very deep for it to handle that waterfall.


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