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#3316 Ica

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 06:10 PM

certainly better.

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This is the exterior portion of Level 4 in The Great Fairy Plea.
The snow is blocking some things in this screen.
Here is a comparison without the snow:

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What do you think?

#3317 Marco

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 06:13 PM

QUOTE(Fausch @ Aug 12 2012, 04:20 PM) View Post

Looking better or worse with the palette?

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I really like the greens and texture look. However, the brown dirt is too saturated, and should be lightened up a bit.

#3318 Ventus

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 06:08 PM

I've been messing around. How does this look?
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#3319 Jared

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 06:26 PM

I like the feel of it, Ventus! The grass could be varied a bit more however. The the bushes could be scattered a bit more. icon_smile.gif

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 07:30 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Aug 13 2012, 06:26 PM) View Post

I like the feel of it, Ventus! The grass could be varied a bit more however. The the bushes could be scattered a bit more. icon_smile.gif

Thanks Jared!, I done some work on it how about this?
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#3321 Jared

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 07:41 PM

A lot better. I think putting a rock somewhere on the dry land would make it look good as well. icon_smile.gif

#3322 Ventus

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 07:47 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Aug 13 2012, 07:41 PM) View Post

A lot better. I think putting a rock somewhere on the dry land would make it look good as well. icon_smile.gif

Alrighty then, I would think a rock or two or three should make it perfect icon_biggrin.gif

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#3323 Jared

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 08:00 PM

The rock on the left could intrude on gameplay a bit. I'd move it or get rid of it.
Loving it!

#3324 Ventus

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 08:05 PM

Thanks so much Jared for the Help. Here's the final version.
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Posted 13 August 2012 - 08:06 PM

No problem pal. icon_smile.gif
I love it. Now some enemies (Of course!) and it's complete.

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 08:12 PM

Yeah... I'm not to sure about the enemies I didn't check and see if this Tileset I'm using even has the enemies set up.
If it does I'll go ahead and add some... If not I'll have to set some up... which will take awhile xP

#3327 Supindahood

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 08:39 PM

I like it Ventus, perhaps reduce the grass detail by using more blanks.
The water could use one other type of the three different waves. Also, don't be afraid to use the smaller rocks near the bigger ones, It makes it look better and less boxy. Just don't go overboard with it. :)

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 09:25 PM

QUOTE(Gonken @ Aug 13 2012, 08:39 PM) View Post

I like it Ventus, perhaps reduce the grass detail by using more blanks.
The water could use one other type of the three different waves. Also, don't be afraid to use the smaller rocks near the bigger ones, It makes it look better and less boxy. Just don't go overboard with it. icon_smile.gif

Thanks for the tips Goken, I really appreciate icon_biggrin.gif.

Edit: I slapped together a new shot. how does it look?
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Edited by Ventus, 13 August 2012 - 10:07 PM.


#3329 Moonbread

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 10:21 PM

You kind of overdid it on the whole "blank grass tiles" as in, it completely clashes with everything else. When Gonken said to use them, he didn't mean for over half the screen, it's just nice to use very sparingly to avoid overdoing it on detail.

#3330 Giggidy

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 10:38 PM

What's wrong with the tree bases?


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