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#3151 Jared

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 06:39 PM

QUOTE(Scootaloo @ Jul 22 2012, 07:11 PM) View Post

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I still hate mountains.

This is just...so beautiful! I love the colors and layout. Good job!

#3152 Russ

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 06:51 PM

Prospekt, you have no right to hate them when you're so much better at them than I am. I really don't have a single complaint with that screen; it's amazing.

#3153 Jared

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 11:38 PM

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YAY A QUEST

#3154 Moon

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 11:42 PM

I feel that the screen is perfect, but the palette, a bit dull...

Maybe try something more adventurous? icon_smile.gif

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Posted 23 July 2012 - 02:21 AM

QUOTE(Jared @ Jul 23 2012, 02:08 PM) View Post

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YAY A QUEST


To be honest, I like the palette, it feels mysterious. With that said, looks great! One of the best screens I've seen from your quest so far. icon_biggrin.gif

QUOTE(Scootaloo @ Jul 23 2012, 08:41 AM) View Post

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I still hate mountains.


Looks great, no complaints from me. icon_smile.gif

#3156 Jared

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Posted 23 July 2012 - 11:25 PM

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Please ignore the subscreen for now. icon_smile.gif

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 02:19 AM

QUOTE(Jared @ Jul 24 2012, 06:25 AM) View Post

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Please ignore the subscreen for now. icon_smile.gif

I can't. It draws way too much attention. My eyes. icon_eyeitus.gif
The screen itself is alright-ish. I'm not sure what bothers me about it. Maybe if you moved the house up one tile? I dunno.

#3158 Soarin

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 09:13 AM

QUOTE(Franky @ Jul 4 2012, 09:24 PM) View Post

Little preview of my in progress Fire Dragon Dungeon. (That sun panel in the entrance screen is a save point. My quest will require save points. The little white spot on it is the sparkle tile, it hasn't started to animate yet in that shot) (The Brown Lynel has been edited to shoot fire) (Second screen from the entrance has an enemy that didn't spawn yet due to me clicking the snapshot as soon as I entered) (The fireballs around the dragon statue move around it, they are scripted)

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Edit: The 3rd screen up has cycling platforms over the lava on the top left side of the screen, that is how you cross that lava gap. they spawn and disappear and repeat one after another.
Dungeon uses cycling burning palette. So some screen colors may look different. The spikes in the first screen should look like the ones in the 3rd, I forgot to fix that)


Dude those screens are the best Do you plan on making a full quest?

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 05:54 PM

QUOTE(Jared @ Jul 24 2012, 12:25 AM) View Post

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Please ignore the subscreen for now. icon_smile.gif


Please don't make the subscreen purple in the end! It looks like barney was smashed into a rectangle and shoved into ZC LOL. And yeah the placement of the house looks weird of that ledge. The palette is kinda bland too, its hard to make a good nighttime palette though. But otherwise I like the layout of the mountains.

Edited by Fire Wizzrobe, 24 July 2012 - 05:58 PM.


#3160 Jared

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 08:45 PM

QUOTE(Fire Wizzrobe @ Jul 24 2012, 06:54 PM) View Post

Please don't make the subscreen purple in the end! It looks like barney was smashed into a rectangle and shoved into ZC LOL. And yeah the placement of the house looks weird of that ledge. The palette is kinda bland too, its hard to make a good nighttime palette though. But otherwise I like the layout of the mountains.

Yeah, the subscreen is already out. xD And the house might be moved up. I'm thinking about it. And thank you, Fire Wizzrobe. icon_smile.gif

#3161 Xenix

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 10:07 PM

QUOTE(Fire Wizzrobe @ Jul 24 2012, 04:54 PM) View Post

Please don't make the subscreen purple in the end! It looks like barney was smashed into a rectangle and shoved into ZC LOL. And yeah the placement of the house looks weird of that ledge. The palette is kinda bland too, its hard to make a good nighttime palette though. But otherwise I like the layout of the mountains.

I agree completely with Fizz. Too Barneyish. Maybe a navy blue or a black and grey gradient effect would work. icon_shrug.gif icon_biggrin.gif

#3162 runa

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Posted 25 July 2012 - 08:40 AM

http://imgur.com/a/9f0eW#1


Active subscreen still needs some work icon_smile.gif

Also,I have a problem with it,Triforce pieces 5-8 won't appear :/


Edit: nevermind,I found the problem

Edited by Hatsunem64, 25 July 2012 - 08:52 AM.


#3163 Xenix

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Posted 25 July 2012 - 09:26 AM

That is really nice looking! I love the atmosphere you've got going on here. icon_biggrin.gif

#3164 runa

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Posted 25 July 2012 - 09:30 AM

I tried to do something with the monochrome palette, and I think I did icon_razz.gif

#3165 Sheik

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Posted 25 July 2012 - 09:39 AM

The whites bother me. Otherwise that's a job well done!


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