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[Tree]

I going to have to disagree with Shane, and agree with Orin. The screens before were very empty in detail even for a classic styled quest. Especially the water. The trees were also really bad. The edited screens are much better.

It looks more "professional" the way you have it now.

The screen with the snow could still use some work. See about more detail in the actual snow and maybe re-shape the shore line as it is really flat. Make it bend and curve.

But I think te edits were a great improvement and they look pretty good now

[Shane]

Well, I never disagreed about what Orin said about the trees, and water.

But the improvements are nice though.

Edited by Shane, 09 June 2012 - 02:39 AM.

[NoeL]

I disagree with Orin, and agree with Shane.

The problem was never lack of detail, it was lack of contrast. The trees are the same colour as the grass, which makes it all blend together and look horrible. Remember that even the classic tileset and its limited palette has green/brown trees on sand - never green on green, or brown on brown, or sand on sand. That's the biggest problem I can see, other than that you just need to work on your art. Check out some pixel art tutorials, learn some mad skillz.

[-DuCkTApE-]

ok but what about these new ones? ( the red things in the 1st pic are eyes to a bad-guy)


(it has animated snow on them)

Edited by -DuCkTApE-, 09 June 2012 - 11:47 AM.

[Lightwulf]

Well, I don't know about everyone else, but I think those shots look great!
It's cool that you can barely see the monsters except for their red eyes (and mouth? that's what it looks like). Kinda' reminds me of the White Wolfos at Snowpeak from TP.

[-DuCkTApE-]

yeah the big patch of red under the little patch are mouths..(i suck i pixel art lol) and thank you lightwulf

[Theryan]

"What an awesome subscreen!"
-Everyone

[Moonbread]

What an awesome subscreen.

Although I'm not fond of the water diagonals thingies or the deku scrub octorocks, everything else looks pretty good. Palette is easy on the eyes.

[ShadowTiger]

Oddly, I thought that was the most note-worthy part of the screenshot. I can't see it in action, but from a current standpoint I think it might look pretty interesting. I'm not sure what I'm more amazed at; the Newfirst-esque tileset or the palette, combined with a classic subscreen. For all I know, you could have opened newfirst and imported classic subscreen elements. :bleh: Heheh.

[Ica]

I like that screen. There is a lot going on and a little bit of two different scenes, but it works.
I don't think the octorocks are colourful enough when compared to the environment.

[Tree]

"What an awesome subscreen!"
-Everyone

I really like what's going on in this screen. The graphics and palette are beautiful, and it's a very well designed screen. I think the tileset is a keeper. Good GB feel as well, but also something totally different... Well done

[Shane]

I like the subscreen. It's very "original".

I must say though, I love the screen. The design and colour choices are fantastic.

[Evile]

I really like the palette and you somehow made newfirst not look terrible. I think the tree trunks could be a bit lighter though, and I hate when the mountains are used like that, makes the perspective look off.

[Supindahood]

"What an awesome subscreen!"
-Everyone

Very good! I like the varieties in this screen, however I should just use one max two types of trees. :)

[aaa2]

Very good! I like the varieties in this screen, however I should just use one max two types of trees.

Why would anybody use a certain maximum type of trees? The more different types of trees the better.