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#2911 Sheik

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 01:10 PM

I actually get that GB vibe from it. It just looks much better. Consider me impressed, Dragonit. icon_smile.gif

#2912 MoscowModder

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 02:31 PM

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Anyways, I was going too add a couple NPC's, but I was rushed. :/

EDIT: Added some things to make it more lively, as you suggested. icon_smile.gif
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Wow. That looks great. You should make some awesome screens like those for Solaris.

Please? PLEASE? I beg of you.

In all seriousness, I like that whole screen except for the odd transition between short grass, long grass, and road on the left side.

Edited by MoscowModder, 25 May 2012 - 02:31 PM.


#2913 Supindahood

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 02:35 PM

Looking very good, but I think you can break some of the fence in the middle, it makes it a bit crowded.
And why is the mountain layered over the fence in the bottom left? It doesn't really work like that. icon_wink.gif
I have no problem with the grass transitions whatsoever.

Edited by Gonken, 25 May 2012 - 02:35 PM.


#2914 Moosh

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 01:24 AM

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factory!
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factory! factory! factory! also those barrels explode


Screens... maps... dmaps... Where do they come from? And where do they go? Such meaningless things... I'll destroy them all!

Edit: That life bar didn't take having its file format changed from bmp to png very well...I assure you it doesn't look that ugly ingame.

Edited by Moosh, 26 May 2012 - 01:29 AM.


#2915 Shane

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 01:43 AM


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At the edge of town Link leaves for adventure! But first he reads a sign.

Edited by Shane, 26 May 2012 - 03:11 AM.


#2916 Jared

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 08:40 AM

Dammit Shane! You kept me in the dark! xD
Anyway, it came out better than I thought! However, the house looks a little strange without windows, and the little doorstep. I think the forest brush could suffice from the little strands of grass like you did with the mountains.

Beautiful job. icon_smile.gif

#2917 Shane

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 09:48 AM

QUOTE(Jared @ May 26 2012, 11:10 PM) View Post

Dammit Shane! You kept me in the dark! xD
Anyway, it came out better than I thought! However, the house looks a little strange without windows, and the little doorstep. I think the forest brush could suffice from the little strands of grass like you did with the mountains.

Beautiful job. icon_smile.gif


I'm sorry! icon_xd.gif

Yeah, there will be a few more windows for variation. But if you look closer there is a window. icon_razz.gif A door step would be good but I dunno where to find one. As I said and shown you on chat, I revamped the brush tile to fit in more - same with the path. And yes there will be grass strands for the brush and building. icon_cat.gif

Currently I'm reworking stuff here and there, I'll show the updated version later on. icon_smile.gif

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EDIT: Later on? Like a minute perhaps?

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You get the caption joke... right? D:

Edited by Shane, 26 May 2012 - 09:59 AM.


#2918 Evan20000

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 10:25 AM

I like it a lot, but the forest area on the left side seems like it would make walking to and from the left side of the screen annoying.

#2919 Shane

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 10:32 AM


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The red spots represent solid - Link cannot go to the left. icon_razz.gif But hm, maybe I'll add something something to strongly indicate it.

#2920 Supindahood

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 10:37 AM

Yes do that, those shadows behind the mountains gives some more limitations but I hope you can work around that. icon_smile.gif

#2921 Xenix

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 10:41 AM

I must say, that looks fantastic! Nice job Shane!

#2922 Marco

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 12:36 PM

QUOTE(Shane @ May 26 2012, 08:48 AM) View Post

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The missing Link... get it? icon_razz.gif



I like it Shane. Flows movement real nice, the shades of green are perfect. It feels so crisp, refreshing, modern..

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Edited by Marco, 26 May 2012 - 12:39 PM.


#2923 Moonbread

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 02:12 PM

I'm not too fond of the road tiles, Shane. Their shading completely contradicts the rest of the tiles, with them looking too cartoony compared to how detailed everything else appears.

#2924 Marco

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 04:57 PM

Y U NO never review and comment my shots world ? ? ?? ?

I need serious feedback for the coming project.


#2925 Jared

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Posted 26 May 2012 - 06:23 PM

QUOTE(Marco @ May 26 2012, 01:36 PM) View Post

I like it Shane. Flows movement real nice, the shades of green are perfect. It feels so crisp, refreshing, modern..

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I think these came out great! The monotone colors make it stand out, as well as the incredible details. Amazing tileset you've got here! The backgrounds are the best part. icon_biggrin.gif

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Playing around with Marco's tileset...


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