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#2896 Jared

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Posted 22 May 2012 - 11:07 PM

QUOTE(Marco @ May 22 2012, 10:24 PM)  

I'm really digging the lime green with the sky blue. It feels so harmonious and adventurous. The vegetation gives a sense of new lands of a journey. <3
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Candycane tileset to be released. Also, introducing simple!


I love it! I like the use of the MC grass. Colors are vibrant as well. (Can't decide which I like best!) Interesting design, too.

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#2897 Moon

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 12:55 AM

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#2898 Shane

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 01:53 AM

Looks nice, very nice in fact, but I'd prefer stone paths going straight.

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 12:59 PM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ May 23 2012, 12:55 AM)  

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^Most Improved Member of 2012.

My only real gripe is that the MC Octoroks don't mix well with that type of style.

#2900 Moon

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 01:15 PM

Thank you, Dawnlight. icon_smile.gif

Are these ones better?
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#2901 Geoffrey

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 02:44 PM

Not really; I recommend using the regular GB octoroks, or the previous ones.

#2902 Supindahood

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 02:51 PM

QUOTE(Dawnlight @ May 23 2012, 11:59 AM)  

^Most Improved Member of 2012.

My only real gripe is that the MC Octoroks don't mix well with that type of style.


I agree.

I really like your screendesign improvements since your name was Yoshidude, hehehe. icon_smile.gif
And for the Octoroc, anything with a proper black outline will look better, I wouldn't recommend editing the tMC Octoroc's though.

#2903 Moon

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Posted 23 May 2012 - 03:17 PM

Ah, thanks for the feedback guys!

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 02:36 PM

Here is an incomplete screen, I know the bottom right corner is empty, but I want critique before I finish it.
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#2905 Supindahood

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 03:04 PM

I like it! But there is something about the house tiles that doesn't fit in, you can start with laying over the grass on the bottom of them, and see if that looks better. icon_wink.gif

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 03:27 PM

Ok, Thanks Gonken! I will do that. I hope to make this game look as good as possible and have as much great gameplay as I can squeeze into it.

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 10:29 PM

As I said in your AoD thread, looks great! (I won't repeat what I said my previous critic but in case you're curious on what I said click here!) Like Gonken said, a grass overlay at the base of the house would make it look more natural.

Also I'd change the blue door frame to brown so it blends in with the roof.

#2908 Moon

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 12:43 AM

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No, you will not have any of this at this point in the game. icon_razz.gif

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 12:50 AM

QUOTE(Dragonite @ May 25 2012, 03:13 PM)  

No, you will not have any of this at this point in the game. icon_razz.gif


Not even five rupees? icon_frown.gif

Anyway looks great one or two NPCs should liven up the place.

#2910 Moon

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 11:16 AM

QUOTE(Shane @ May 24 2012, 11:50 PM)  

Not even five rupees? icon_frown.gif

Anyway looks great one or two NPCs should liven up the place.

Yes, not even 5 rupees. >:)

Anyways, I was going too add a couple NPC's, but I was rushed. :/

EDIT: Added some things to make it more lively, as you suggested. icon_smile.gif
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