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#2851 Tree

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 09:36 PM

I really like the shot Shane. Very simple, but also complex at the same time. Also love the palette, and mostly the Lttp feel! icon_thumbsup.gif

Now, I've been inactive for quite some time. Life is really taking up all my time. but I've been on and off with zquest.
I have a map pretty much completed, but here is just a screen to show you that I'm alive, not that it matters icon_razz.gif JK

Edited by Keiichi123, 13 May 2012 - 09:36 PM.


#2852 Jared

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 09:39 PM

QUOTE(Keiichi123 @ May 13 2012, 10:36 PM) View Post

I really like the shot Shane. Very simple, but also complex at the same time. Also love the palette, and mostly the Lttp feel! icon_thumbsup.gif

Now, I've been inactive for quite some time. Life is really taking up all my time. but I've been on and off with zquest.
I have a map pretty much completed, but here is just a screen to show you that I'm alive, not that it matters icon_razz.gif JK

...W-what? Shane hasn't posted in like 20 posts!! It was me! Am I that invisible? ;3;

And I remember you showing me that. The two blocks of grass at the bottom of the screen is used wrong. But I like the shape and details! Good job.

#2853 Tree

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 09:43 PM

I know. I didn't feel like putting his entire post in mine icon_razz.gif

But yeah, I know the grass is misused, but I did that purposely. I Don't remember why, but it looks fine to me icon_wink.gif


#2854 Dawnlight

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Posted 13 May 2012 - 10:58 PM

Not only does that windmill style-clash but it's too small compared to that large house. I guess Tiny_Shane can fit into that windmill. icon_razz.gif

#2855 Shane

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 12:39 AM

QUOTE(Jared @ May 14 2012, 11:16 AM) View Post
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The entrance of Enave Village, a village of peace...and a small guardhouse.


Beautiful.

My only complaint is the _/\ shapes mountain at the bottom. But it looks like a peaceful trail, I could imagine some grey stones, shallow water, and tall grass there. icon_biggrin.gif Small guardhouse? Where? icon_razz.gif

QUOTE(Keiichi123 @ May 14 2012, 12:06 PM) View Post
I really like the shot Shane. Very simple, but also complex at the same time. Also love the palette, and mostly the Lttp feel! icon_thumbsup.gif

Now, I've been inactive for quite some time. Life is really taking up all my time. but I've been on and off with zquest.
I have a map pretty much completed, but here is just a screen to show you that I'm alive, not that it matters icon_razz.gif JK


Thanks! icon_smile.gif

My only complaint is the brown highlights on the tree and how you got a dark bush but light tall grass. Nice design!

QUOTE(Dawnlight @ May 14 2012, 01:28 PM) View Post
Not only does that windmill style-clash but it's too small compared to that large house. I guess Tiny_Shane can fit into that windmill. icon_razz.gif


But Mecha_Dawnlight can't. icon_razz.gif

Edited by Shane, 14 May 2012 - 12:41 AM.


#2856 Supindahood

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 04:44 AM

I would add some interactive objects like bushes and tallgrass, othervise its good. icon_smile.gif


#2857 Shane

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 08:20 AM

Going to post here instead of my development topic - I'm pretty sure other people in their QPFs want their threads recognized I kind of feeling a little bad that I see my thread as the latest post, when I see a few threads that haven't been posted in for a while:

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As you can see LoL is officially underway. icon_biggrin.gif

EDIT: Ditched the centered text, replaced the previous image with the new.

Edited by Shane, 14 May 2012 - 08:34 AM.


#2858 Marco

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 03:53 PM

QUOTE(Furion @ Apr 26 2011, 10:50 PM) View Post

Draw the highest card, and you'll be beheaded.
Draw the lowest card, and you'll be tortured.
Draw the blank card, and you'll be given another chance.
Draw the Joker, and you'll miss those limbs.
Draw the Greedy Card, and you'll be set free.


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Ahem. An old custom creation *excluding the character sprite*.


#2859 Xenix

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 04:42 PM

QUOTE(Shane @ May 14 2012, 07:20 AM) View Post

Going to post here instead of my development topic - I'm pretty sure other people in their QPFs want their threads recognized I kind of feeling a little bad that I see my thread as the latest post, when I see a few threads that haven't been posted in for a while:

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As you can see LoL is officially underway. icon_biggrin.gif

EDIT: Ditched the centered text, replaced the previous image with the new.

Dude, don't worry. icon_smile.gif We have the QPF's for the sake of posting updates, keeping things organized, and such. You're not doing anything wrong. icon_biggrin.gif

On the subject of the shot, very nice. You ripped Cukeman's tiles in very well.

Edited by Sepulcher, 14 May 2012 - 04:43 PM.


#2860 Shane

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 05:10 PM

QUOTE(Sepulcher @ May 15 2012, 07:12 AM) View Post

Dude, don't worry. icon_smile.gif We have the QPF's for the sake of posting updates, keeping things organized, and such. You're not doing anything wrong. icon_biggrin.gif

On the subject of the shot, very nice. You ripped Cukeman's tiles in very well.

Yeah, I guess so, but either way I'm going to let the development thread steam out until the 25th of May comes. icon_smile.gif

Thanks, they were easy to rip, Cukeman did a wonderful job at fitting the colours into 4 Csets. icon_smile.gif

Edited by Shane, 14 May 2012 - 05:11 PM.


#2861 Tree

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 07:14 PM

QUOTE(Dawnlight @ May 13 2012, 09:58 PM) View Post

Not only does that windmill style-clash but it's too small compared to that large house. I guess Tiny_Shane can fit into that windmill. icon_razz.gif

Agreed.

But there is no better windmill tiles so...I'm screwed icon_razz.gif
It doesn't really take away from the screen, does it?

#2862 Moon

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 07:31 PM

It makes that part of the screen look kind of odd, because the other tiles are much more detailed while the windmill is not.

#2863 Xenix

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 09:16 PM

I figured I'd post these here too.
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I will be finishing the intro sequence sometime this week and then I will start making the sequences that start link on his adventure. The building in the second shot is WIP and therefore temporary.

Also, the mountains used in the first shot is on purpose. You would understand if you saw the screen above it on the map.

Edited by Sepulcher, 14 May 2012 - 09:19 PM.


#2864 Jared

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 09:33 PM

Looks great, Sepulcher. Not much else to say. icon_smile.gif

#2865 MoscowModder

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Posted 14 May 2012 - 10:00 PM

Those bottom corners of the mountains always annoy me. You should edit them to match the ground they're on.


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