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[Supindahood]

I would move it to another screen and make it bigger.

[The Satellite]

Or at least push it further into the corner so that only a part of it is sticking out into the screen. It'd look better that way.

[Moon]

Will do, but, I think I'd rather get rid of it altogether.

Edit: Like this?

Edited by Dragonite, 13 April 2012 - 06:38 PM.

[Supindahood]

The spot is looking good now, but the stair shouldn't be in the corner tile, the boxes also could be moved to another part of the island which would be on another screen.

[NoeL]

It's not a good idea to have stairs/caves that are out of reach of the player, since they'll waste their time trying to figure out how to get there. If you have flippers then putting the cave on the island is fine (btw, I preferred the original island location)

[Moon]

Testing scripts, and a screen.

Edited by Dragonite, 14 April 2012 - 05:14 PM.

[Dawnlight]

Screen Design: Excellent
Text Box: I suggest making the window larger.

[Shane]

Testing scripts, and a screen.

Some may disagree but the grass colour seems a little wacky, it sticks out like a sore thumb and it doesn't fit well with the mountain colours. Also the text seems off centered within the text box.

But screen design is nice.

Edited by Shane, 14 April 2012 - 07:58 PM.

[Supindahood]

I thought I changed the grass color in the palette, but seems like he didn't import them.

[Shane]

My attempt to make a slightly altered LttP set for my quest. Mainly a concept screen showing what I have and to brush up on my mountain usage.

Edited by Shane, 18 April 2012 - 07:20 AM.

[Supindahood]

The layout is great!
It's good to see more people using the mountains in a cool and creative way, that's what I liked about those mountains tiles.

[Geoffrey]

My attempt to make a slightly altered LttP set for my quest. Mainly a concept screen showing what I have and to brush up on my mountain usage.

It looks very nice, Shane. Do continue with this.

[Supindahood]

Is the palette custom btw, Shane?
I would make some transition from the grass to the mountain (like straws of grass), instead of the black outline on the mountain.

Edited by Gonken, 18 April 2012 - 11:52 AM.

[Jared]

Looks amazing Shane, as I already told you.

Your palette kind of looks like this one:


Maybe you wanna rip it in? Both palettes look great in my opinion.

[Shane]

Thanks for the comment guys!

Is the palette custom btw, Shane?
I would make some transition from the grass to the mountain (like straws of grass), instead of the black outline on the mountain.

I used Linkus' beach palette he made for Dragonite, I got both of their permission to use the palette of course.
Also that may be a good idea actually, I'll go test them.

Thanks!

Edit: Also Jared I'll be sure to use the palette!

Edited by Shane, 18 April 2012 - 08:10 PM.