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#2716 Saffith

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 11:04 AM

QUOTE(NoeL @ Apr 9 2012, 01:33 AM) View Post
Looking much better. I thought I'd try and tweak them just a little, see if I could squeeze a little more "life" out of them. Your lava palette was pretty good, so my alterations are pretty minimal there. Thoughts?

Sure, looks good.

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I also thought I'd try and clean up the whole fugly Pure palette a bit, make it look a bit more natural. You like?

Pretty nice. I kind of liked the bluish tint, but maybe I'd just gotten used to it. I'll try yours out for a bit.

#2717 Shane

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Posted 09 April 2012 - 11:55 PM


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#2718 Omega

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Posted 10 April 2012 - 03:28 AM

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Water is fine, don't comment on it, as it's not animated here. Let me know if ya see any graphical mistakes. Such as GFX bugs or a tile placed wrongly. I'm still getting used to these tiles. PS: I ran into one of the cactus so that is why I lost two hearts xD

Edit: Cool screen Shane!

Edited by Franky, 10 April 2012 - 03:45 AM.


#2719 Supindahood

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Posted 10 April 2012 - 08:14 AM

Franky, I suggest only use the MC rocks or only use my edited MC rocks, and not both. The diagonal bottoms of the mountain could be replaced with the diagonal that has a sand transition instead of the black outline.

And the sand questionmarks from AKTTH shouldn't be placed as decoration imo.

#2720 Nightmeres

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 07:10 AM

QUOTE(Shane @ Apr 10 2012, 12:55 AM) View Post


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i like the new one a lot more. the pallet is greate. design is great. overall 10/10

#2721 Ica

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 02:37 PM

Franky, pretty much all I can say is, there's too much stuff!
There's too much everything. The screen makes me a bit consufused.
Also, those steps by the main entrance make no sense, as it currently looks like it's over the wall. You could either move it down one tile or change the walls on that part.

#2722 Twilight Knight

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 05:39 PM

QUOTE(Franky @ Apr 10 2012, 10:28 AM) View Post

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I like your screens, but I'm a little bothered by the first screen in particular.

It seems like all objects are divided in "blocks" really. 6 bushes next to each other, the water in a square, the high elevation in a square. I suggest spreading the bushes a little over the entire screen, or let them stay like that if there's a good reason (like they were placed artificially). Also the pool of water to be a bit more natural unless of course that's artificial too. And I would make the upper right corner high elevation instead of low elevation and have it connect to the other high mountain.

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It's obviously lacking your custom tiles, I also was too lazy to use the SD3 water.

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#2723 Moon

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 05:42 PM

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#2724 Ica

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 06:34 PM

Nice screen, dragonite. Not much to say, really. I like the pallet.

#2725 Moon

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 06:50 PM

All the credit of the palette should go to Gonken, after all, he is the one who made it. icon_razz.gif

#2726 Omega

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 06:51 PM

Actually I never bunch things together like I did here, I'm a huge fan of spacing things out lol. I was a bit lazy for those screens though.

#2727 Moon

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 05:25 PM

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#2728 Supindahood

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 05:32 PM

I like the design a lot, except the small island on the left top. If it has no purpose I guess you can remove it.

#2729 Moon

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 05:35 PM

QUOTE(Gonken @ Apr 13 2012, 06:32 PM) View Post

I like the design a lot, except the small island on the left top. If it has no purpose I guess you can remove it.
There was supposed to be a cave with a heart container piece in it on that island, but I agree, it does look pretty bad.


#2730 Russ

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 06:18 PM

I actually like the island in the corner. It breaks up the monotony of the water. I'd keep it.


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